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vail_kagami

First to Leave

Oct 01, 2007 03:18

Rating: PG
Prompt: #032 - Sunrise
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: None
Pairing: Koschei/Theta
Summary: Neither of them will change their mind.
Note: Probably a bit pointless. Anyway, it might not seem to have anything to do with my claim before the last line.

( He always loves him more in the morning. )

medium: story, fandom: doctor who, table: time war, doctor who era: academy

Comments 8

Perfect! eryaforsthye October 1 2007, 02:06:54 UTC

Oh! Oh! Oh!
*sobs*

This is absolutely perfect!

Oh, Koschei.
*sobs*

I really, really, really love this one.
It may be my favourite out of all your War pieces - it's just so beautiful and fits so wonderfully!

*mems under 'Best'*

Re: Perfect! vail_kagami October 1 2007, 02:13:13 UTC

Funny that - I didn't think it was any good. But your praise means a lot to me!
I know I haven't reviewed all your stories lately. I've read them all and they are wonderful, but I was feeling a little burned out the past few days. Still, there were some stories I HAD to comment on. (Like your Jack/Doctor series! LOVE that one!)
Anyway, I'm sorry!

just_reed October 1 2007, 04:37:08 UTC

God, the ending's a killer.

Very well done. *claps*

cherryfeather October 1 2007, 06:04:42 UTC

Oh. Oh, ouch. The ending really hits you. You've perfectly captured the Master's voice here. (And I love the sudden changeover from Theta and Koschei to the Doctor and the Master. That was Simply Brilliant.)

amyross October 1 2007, 21:12:30 UTC

Oh, that's wonderful.

It's desperately sad, of course, but I still love it. It's exactly how I imagine them to have been, only better written!

marah_sarie October 1 2007, 21:34:58 UTC

Oh, this was absolutely beautiful, as always. I'm definitely incorporating this into "my own personal canon" for Theta and Koschei and their poor doomed relationship. This is certainly how Theta/Koschei ended and Doctor/Master began.