Comments | vail_kagami: Winterworld

vail_kagami

Winterworld

Mar 07, 2010 23:38

Title: Winterworld
Beta: sff_reader
Fandom: Star trek TOS
Rating: PG
Pairing: Spock/McCoy
Summary: A fight between Spock and McCoy on a mission and its potentially fatal consequences.
Words: 2016
Note: Written for the fourth challenge of the ship war run by st_respect. The prompt was "In the doghouse again".

( “It does not matter what I tell you. You betrayed my trust, as my doctor and as my mate!” )

fandom: star trek, medium: story

Comments 10

vala3 March 8 2010, 21:57:03 UTC

This was a great h/c fic. Like that Spock finally was able to see from Bones pov. Especially liked the line " Knew there was something missing.....besides you."

vail_kagami March 9 2010, 18:57:49 UTC

Thanks! Glad it worked for you. It was actually rather fun, though these prompt fics can be exhausting.

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vail_kagami March 9 2010, 19:28:52 UTC

Sorry to make you cry. Spock can be an ass sometimes.

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vail_kagami March 9 2010, 19:29:29 UTC

That's great!
Thanks for the comment!

cardiac_logic March 9 2010, 04:16:30 UTC

This is wonderful! Your characterizations are perfect, and the story is very touching.

vail_kagami March 9 2010, 19:29:55 UTC

Thanks a lot!

silver_cyanne March 12 2010, 00:15:26 UTC

This is really lovely. And very them, their relationship will never be smooth but it is very solid where it matters and you show that well.

vail_kagami March 12 2010, 03:42:52 UTC

That's what I was going for. Thank you!