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vail_kagami

The Light Lingers

Feb 20, 2010 04:00

Title: The Light Lingers
Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Rating: G
Pairing: Spock/McCoy
Summary: Spock finally comes home.
Words: 240
Note: Written for the second surprise bonus round at st_respect.

( He always asked too much of himself, even in his final years, when his body was already failing him. )

fandom: star trek, medium: story

Comments 17

pony_rocks February 20 2010, 10:17:18 UTC

That's beautiful! ♥

vail_kagami February 20 2010, 20:06:54 UTC

Thanks!

tprillahfiction February 20 2010, 13:58:16 UTC

Very touching and beautiful! I love it.

vail_kagami February 20 2010, 20:07:34 UTC

Thank you!

gottabefierce February 20 2010, 14:09:03 UTC

Very sad but touching at the same time. I love your use of imagery with the sun. It's a very nice look into their love in the later years. Well done:).

vail_kagami February 20 2010, 20:08:18 UTC

Thanks!

Love your icon.

gottabefierce February 21 2010, 00:25:03 UTC

Thank you:).

nightrider101 February 20 2010, 14:24:49 UTC

This is beautiful. I could feel Leonard's exhaustion, as well as, the depth of emotion he felt when Spock returned.

Because I'd be remiss in my duties, in the first paragraph second sentence I think nab is supposed to be nap.

Great job!

vail_kagami February 20 2010, 20:10:11 UTC

Thanks for pointing that out!

I also noticed that I forgot to correct the extensive spacing. (This was posted in a comment originally.)

yami_no_kaiba February 21 2010, 10:04:49 UTC

I know you said this was a death fic, and I can see where those elements are, but I honestly wish to feel that this is nothing more than one of those long comfortable silences.

Great ficlet!

vail_kagami February 21 2010, 22:57:38 UTC

Thanks!

Just consider it a very long comfortable silence.