smallville fic: truth is the girl with a shovel
This is based on paraxdisepink 's hilarious snippet here. Hers is better. But this was fun. So...
Cracky Turbulence/Hex. Post Birthday wish, newly-liberated Chloe stalks Davis through a cornfield and takes on her greatest fear, good sex.
( “Chloe.” He had whispered brokenly as she peered in on the grave he was digging. His body was all knotted up, tense, hard with energy that needed to get out. “I know. You’re keeping the beast at bay.” She traced his cheek and his face turned into it. His eyes looked like he expected her to be screaming. All in good time. Chloe kneeled over his lap and knocked him out with his shovel. “Don’t.” )
Cracky Turbulence/Hex. Post Birthday wish, newly-liberated Chloe stalks Davis through a cornfield and takes on her greatest fear, good sex.
( “Chloe.” He had whispered brokenly as she peered in on the grave he was digging. His body was all knotted up, tense, hard with energy that needed to get out. “I know. You’re keeping the beast at bay.” She traced his cheek and his face turned into it. His eyes looked like he expected her to be screaming. All in good time. Chloe kneeled over his lap and knocked him out with his shovel. “Don’t.” )
And I just got all serious about this.
she’d watched him in alleys as he trussed up a few dozen criminals,
I shouldn't be turned on by that... Actually, that just sums up Davissexuality in a nutshell. We shouldn't be turned on by that ...
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Well, she's a bit all over the place- but the interconnecting thread in this is her repression of all these borderline actions that have been going on for a while. I think the original Chloe character- the interesting one, no way she wouldn't have known what was going down with Davis. hardy har. Andif she's going to go for the spying she might as well get something selfish out of the deal.
The bodies and murder- yes. I'm still kicking myself for not getting the freezer to work. Oh well, there's always next time.
Alleys trussing up criminals? Yeah. Me three. I am trying to get this 'In the Blood' thing to focus on that weird draw/extra panty itch. Then there's also Davis going all loonycakes after blood drinking, Bette into some weird shit but then Chloe..., well she has a wall with vigilante murder on it, is willing to get herself killed a few times...and is convinced it's all about compassion. Until that time she goes to seduce Davis. Then it's all about research.
OH COME ON THE RED EYES.
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A musical episode could have been something with him in it. I am imagining Davis singing about dismembered bodies right about now. That could very well for a manip. I have this teeny clip of him dancing… There really is almost no end to what you can do to this stuff. Now I won’t be able to stop thinking of it.
Oh please don’t fuck Chlark in your sleep. ;P That would be disgusting, and might ruin the joy that YOU ACTUALLY GOT INTO DAVIS.
I see Clark as Chloe’s lifeline to not growing up. He represents the safe, asexual fixation, Edward without sparkles whatmayyou. He won’t ever reciprocate and isn’t capable of loving anyone, maybe, even Lex, but she’s got this deep seated paranoia of what a real relationship would mean.
I think Chloe, she's so repressed and Davis' situation ( ... )
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You were his police escort, and a man? Did your manly-ass dream self frisk him? haha
Chloe's just a mess. The only thing she's good for is creating a character or version of her character that's admittedly pathological and therefore more interesting. The desire to be bad is always interesting. A new take on woman hot for a serial killer is always interesting. Please stop exciting me with these thoughts of vampire!Davis. It's not fair. He's like Angel and Dexter in one now hehe
I need to get back to writing the Crossroads thing. I need to work my drunk-Chloe-club-ficlet thing in there along with the planned vigilante action. I just ... the last two chapters sucked all the writing energy out of me and I have been making fantasy book maps.
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