Teach Me Gently How To Breathe for angela_weber

Jul 23, 2011 01:21

Title: Teach Me Gently How To Breathe
Author: ceridweyn_lin 
Fandom: Community
Gift for: angela_weber 
Characters/Pairing: Jeff/Britta
Rating: R
Word Count:  2538
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters. 
Spoilers/Warnings: spoilers, kind of, through the end of season 2, also some salty language
Summary: Driving several hundred miles across the country with Jeff Winger isn't the ( Read more... )

recipient: angela_weber, rating: r, fandom: community, author: ceridweyn_lin

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ozmissage July 23 2011, 14:42:47 UTC
You have an insanely perfect Britta voice. And the way you write her relationship with Jeff is amazing. I love everything about this fic---the creepy motel in Omaha, the storm, the fact that Jeff gets upset when Sirius dies---so wonderful. This is awesome, my dear! <3

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ceridweyn_lin July 31 2011, 08:11:36 UTC
I am fail at responding in a timely manner. And thank you, thank you!

In my head, Jeff is a secret Hufflepuff. He says he's a Slytherin, but he's totally lying.

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angela_weber July 24 2011, 22:26:37 UTC
Oh my god! :DDDDDDDDDD

I'm sorry, had to collect myself for a moment there. Because this is just beyond delightful. You really capture everything I love about Britta and about this pairing. They drive each other crazy like no one else, and you show that so perfectly.

Then you're thirty and dicking around with a guy who used to be hot shit but is now mostly just snark and hair gel and a heart that keeps growing three sizes whether he wants it to or not, and at that point maybe things seem to get a little bit out of control. !!!!!!! Seriously, I have never read a better Britta voice. You have her down pat. Annnnnd my god is your dialogue brilliant.

Jeff gets kind of upset when Sirius dies.CACKLING. I can't even pick a favorite part. And you hit so many of my happy places: weather, crazy road trip, Jeff and his chest muscles. What I am trying to say is: can you write for the show? Pretty pretty please ( ... )

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ceridweyn_lin July 31 2011, 08:23:06 UTC
Horribly late in replying, but: thank you so much for feedback that I may have read more than once and grinned at definitely multiple times! Your prompts were amazing, too, allowed me to get with all of the fun vacation cliches, and of course slip in Jeff's chest, because I would be remiss if I was confronted without rain and there was no musculature. (Ignore the awkward in that sentence...)

Anyways, I am so glad you liked it! <3

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missy_useless July 29 2011, 17:50:29 UTC
Oh, what an amazing fic. Your Britta voice is wonderful, as is the dialog and your Jeff. Bless. Reading this was a delight. ♥

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ceridweyn_lin July 31 2011, 08:25:38 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! :DD

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primarycolors92 July 31 2011, 18:54:42 UTC
Your voice. Oh my God your Britta voice is flawless. I mean, I know everyone else said it too, but it bears repeating because seriously, PERFECT.

Jeff gets kind of upset when Sirius dies.

I DIED. This whole fic is insanely good; I want to have its babies!

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