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va_patt3rson

each night has had new direction

Aug 22, 2005 21:13

it's that pause in your thought that's resulting from the notion you'd only be able to say "i love you" one last time that sparks a threatening movement-- what if you only had one chance to say goodbye to one person? i've been taken for granted and lost track of some of my most valuable ties that bonded me to my most valuable possessions. you've ( Read more... )

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anonymous August 22 2005, 18:42:07 UTC

hmm...interesting opening. poetry in prose, a good twist. and maybe matt has a point, this seems to go just slightly deeper than the earlier works. is there something youre not being entirely honest about?
Jason

ps good luck at tennis and dance

va_patt3rson August 22 2005, 18:44:29 UTC

haha... you two pick up on feelings really well. true fans. =P. but i mean... nothing too serious-- it's like every thought that was in my head at the time combined is this piece of writing. and i'm being completely honest, but not completely open.

ps and thanks. <33.

anonymous August 22 2005, 19:02:12 UTC

ha ha. i like your sense of irony. you "every thought that was in my head at the time combined is this piece of writing" then say that your not being completely open. i wonder if anyone else caught this? well anyway i guess you have your reasons for not being open. im certainly not the person you would admit the reason to, so i wont bother myself with it. you can tell the rest if or when youre ready.
Jason

va_patt3rson August 23 2005, 07:03:39 UTC

it was everything... just vague... i can mention everything but still not really say anything at all.

anonymous August 23 2005, 07:10:48 UTC

i didnt know you were such a politician. well do what you wish, nobody could really stop you anyway.
Jason

anonymous August 23 2005, 19:42:23 UTC

on an unrelated note, i noticed that you have dowding twice in the second semester. thats harsh. good luck getting through that.
Jason

va_patt3rson August 24 2005, 10:19:24 UTC

on the same day as well.... =\.

anonymous August 24 2005, 15:28:41 UTC

well i dont know what youve heard about him. but anything thats negative is probably true. honestly i never had a problem with him, but the rest of my class couldnt stand him. you can openly argue with him and get away with it, and just talk to friends and he wont notice. those are some of the things i found entertaining.
Jason

ps good luck with dance and tennis

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