Writing blues.
"She kisses him. Her lips are moist and her tongue is playing a lazy game of catch-me-if-you-can with his."
It doesn't look convincing. I know why it doesn't look convincing. I have a general feel of how I want this particular piece to come across, but I'm having a hard time finding the right combination of words to convey it. It's frustrating, because the five or six sentences right above it have really, really nice imagery and they just feel tangible enough to paint a neat little picture of what's going on...
And I get stuck on kissing.
Since when do I get stuck on kissing?
I'm gonna go and kill something.
Also, feuerschein , we gotta talk Criminal Minds. I've got theories.
It doesn't look convincing. I know why it doesn't look convincing. I have a general feel of how I want this particular piece to come across, but I'm having a hard time finding the right combination of words to convey it. It's frustrating, because the five or six sentences right above it have really, really nice imagery and they just feel tangible enough to paint a neat little picture of what's going on...
And I get stuck on kissing.
Since when do I get stuck on kissing?
I'm gonna go and kill something.
Also, feuerschein , we gotta talk Criminal Minds. I've got theories.