Hahaha, that was entertaining. Good job with Damian's POV (though I definitely don't agree with his line of reasoning that homophobia is a "clear sign that they themselves suffer from some form of homosexual attraction.") The ending was hilarious, I love how it's like, at the end of all that spouting and talking and bragging on his part, in the end he was undone by Tim's "I love you too." LOL. Perfect way for both of them to react there.
Ugh, seriously, lots of good things here. Good buildup of the bullying scene, and Damian's analysis of it was spot-on, and I also loved that as soon as Tim came back into the manor, it was all out pound-the-kid-into-the-ground and basically showing the contrast between school-Tim and Bat-Tim. ♥
Read this during lunch at work. Helped make a shitty day better. I love the vibe, Damien stalking, his feelings of almost anger at watching Tim. The brotherly dynamic was great too. Loved the boys fighting - but I always love it when 'brothers are physically fighting each other. Thanks for posting1
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Ugh, seriously, lots of good things here. Good buildup of the bullying scene, and Damian's analysis of it was spot-on, and I also loved that as soon as Tim came back into the manor, it was all out pound-the-kid-into-the-ground and basically showing the contrast between school-Tim and Bat-Tim. ♥
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I wouldn't say I'm a huge fan but I do like it. Besides, you know, it's YOU! Are the other prompts in your LJ?
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http://dcu-memes.livejournal.com/5941.html?thread=316213#t316213
http://dcu-memes.livejournal.com/5941.html?thread=305717#t305717
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Very spot on with the characterizations! Damian was pretty clever there. ;)
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