OOC: Navagation + How's My Driving

[usedbrine]

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So, how am I doing? I'm fairly new to this muse and haven't gotten him completely figured out. I would love as much help as you possibly could give me.

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[usedbrine]

I will apologize in advance if this doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I got this notif as I was going to sleep

Oh yeah, it was completely an oversight. Part of it, at the beginning, was focusing on getting her main journal set up and then it kind of just slipped my mind.

I definitely agree with you on some points. I have played up the man hating part of her a little bit too much, and I'm working on toning that down quite a bit. I want to do it slowly so it's not just SUDDEN CHARACTER CHANGE. A lot of her hatred is focused on one person now with a bit of annoyed friendliness with others.

I'm going to be fully honest with you, I never got around to playing Super Sluggers, or quite a few of the other games, and that's why that part isn't included in the app, or her characterization. So if it seems like she's off, that would be why.

So, from there, I know I'm definitely missing something for sure. I do plan on getting around to playing it and then I can maybe fix up everything else. Her man hating felt very right at the time, and her excitement and exclamation marks feel right pretty much all of the time. But she, to me, seems like the excitable sort.

I do feel like I do play her friendlier aspects (like when she apologized to Yosuke by giving him a Pokemon, and how she tries her best to be friendly with everyone she meets), but I don't think I'm doing it enough and it might be time for another canon review.

I will do my best to work on everything that you've listed here. I want to thank you again for leaving me crit, I am going to work on it, and please come back to me in a month or two, if you don't mind, and give me an update. It will be the key to making her a better character.