A hidden femme's secret - Part Three Point Five

Oct 08, 2011 04:46


Title: A hidden femme's secret
Subtitle: Daring Rescue
Part: 3.5/3
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Verse: TF-Bayverse
Anniversary Challenges: Week four prompt - # Dark of the night
Rating: NC 17
Genre: romance, drama
Warnings: slash, death (no main character), mentions of abuse and talk about rape, description of interfacing (non-sticky)
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl
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romance, tf-bayverse, drama, prowlxjazz: 11, transformers, angst, multi chapter, rated pg-17, comfort, fanfiction: 2011, death

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Re: Create a tale based on this usagi_atemu_tom December 23 2011, 14:34:33 UTC
*sighs* Sorry I am this late with replying, but the last weeks have been very hectic. Anway, about your question and all. Well I don't see any problems why you should not post the story. I like it. Just... will Jazz be acting... female here or the whole carrying be described a lot like a human pregnancy? Because I have to admit that rather like Jazz to be Jazz mostly the mech-manly and all and personally I am a big fan of carrying being described as something not so much like human pregancy.
The other thing I feel I have to warn you or point out... well since I wrote that story a bit with some pairings in mind, even if they are not obvious and all... if I remember I made Hide/Ratch clear (my favourite together with Jazz/Prowl), I am also a big fan of Blue/Twins and even though it doesn't HAVE to be that way, I cannot help but decided for myself that the end, in my own mind had a SLIGHT (really slight) hint that Megatron/Optimus would be possible, though that one is an open one. Mmmmh, I hope I did not forget anymecha and if you want to indulge a bit in one of the side characters, that's okay, though try to not make their roles too big, if you can. I myself like OCs for a bit of plot and for them to simply function but I am not a big fan for them as being part of the main character group, therefore I hope you understand if I do not want to see that happen with my own created characters in a sequel.

Yeah... now I've come up with restrictions... damn. I hope you don't mind them too much and understand. I am surprised myself right now, never thought I would end up doing it like this but... I guess this is the first time someone asked to write a sequel from one of my own stories. ^^

Oh and IF you do write this and post it, please leave me a not with a link? I would of course like to read it. LJ or ffnet, doesn't matter, I am on both to find. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

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