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Surprising Origin

Oct 02, 2011 02:14

Title: Surprising Origin
Part: 1/1
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Anniversary Challenges: Week one prompt - #Surprising Origin
Rating: PG
Genre: romance, general
Warnings: slash
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl
Feedback: Please, yes, I love feedback! =^^=

Summary: Surviving the attack of Megatron was the easy part. Now Jazz has to face the truth about a mech that he thought ( Read more... )

romance, tf-bayverse, prowlxjazz: 11, one-shot, transformers, comfort, fanfiction: 2011, rated pg

Comments 8

renegadewriter8 October 2 2011, 01:07:49 UTC

Very original and cool! Poor Prowl, having to go through that glad he got Jazz back again! XD

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 22:40:42 UTC

Thank you. Yes, this time it's Prowl who had to go through so much and do his job just like usually special ops does. But now they are back together again.
Thanks a lot for commenting on this. ^^

darkeyes_17 October 2 2011, 05:41:45 UTC

What a great response to the prompt. I liked Prowl's origin story and that he's the one with the ability to sorcel.

Great job, you should be proud of yourself.

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 22:41:53 UTC

Thank you so very much for your kind comment. Yes, I wanted to do something where everything is the other way around. I just like to try out to surprise the readers with something they might not expect. ^^ I am happy to see that my idea found approval.

jarakrisafis October 2 2011, 09:06:10 UTC

Kaonite Prowl, No wonder the twins never sneak anything past him. Love that he was Bluestreaks big brother, and a nice twist that he is the one undercover rather than Jazz.

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 22:44:42 UTC

Well, even if Prowl did rather dislike the way the Kaonite lived, he had to learn a thing or two to survive for as long as he did.
Thank you very much for the feedback. And yes, the twist was very much wanted to surprise the readers with something they might not have expected. ^^

fianna9 October 2 2011, 11:51:11 UTC

Great story. Prowl not wanting to reveal his origins makes perfect sense. The crystal was the perfect touch.

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 22:46:04 UTC

Thank you very much. After coming up with the idea to twist Prowl's role to what the reader would usually expect from Jazz, the scene with the crystal somehow wrote itself into the story. But it was a good way to give proof for Prowl's sincerity. ^^