Uneasy conversations, part two of two.
Title: Uneasy conversations, part two of two.
Series: Scars of the past, complicate the future.
Pairing: Sharon and Andy
Word count: 936
Rating: T
Summary: Richard visits Sharon at the station.
AN:Sorry this one is a bit late, but things have been really hectic in RL.Sorry for some reason the lj cut is not working, anyone an idea what I did wrong ( Read more... )
Series: Scars of the past, complicate the future.
Pairing: Sharon and Andy
Word count: 936
Rating: T
Summary: Richard visits Sharon at the station.
AN:Sorry this one is a bit late, but things have been really hectic in RL.Sorry for some reason the lj cut is not working, anyone an idea what I did wrong ( Read more... )
This is a VERY interesting take on Sharon's character!!! I had never thought about her having a softness there-I don't want to say weakness, because I don't think wanting to be loved is a weakness in her case, but its interesting to think of her acceptance of Rusty as a sort of sentimental journey-a way to be softer and to be loved!
Loving this. Great job!
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That line just popped up in my mind and I really liked it as I believed it would be something Richard would say.
I don't see Sharon as a person who is desperate to be loved. But I do believe she has been more open in the past, I believe it must have been easier to open up to someone then.
And I believe that her marriage not working out did affect her as a person.
Now there's always this certain distance. She knows she isn't particularly liked.
But how can anyone not be affected by that? And in that scene with Rusty you could see how vulnerable she is underneath that brick exterior.
I do believe that while she is trying to get to know Rusty better, she is opening up more too.
You can tell the squad reacts to that more softer side of her. Like in that scene when Rusty was shortly missing, when his mom didn't show up.
You could see that Andy and Provenza were affected by her rather emotional reaction. Like their eyes were opened that this woman indeed also has a softer side.
More will follow :)
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I like it when you say I've got some good intuition. I actually do have that in RL, and it comes in handy while exploring characters, trying to get myself in there shoes, analize them a bit.
Glad that it shows in my writing.
I'll upload more Friday, I still have to do some last editing on the next chapter parts.
I have a funeral today, work tomorrow, just heard I won't have to be there the entire afternoon, so maybe I can do some editing when I'm home early :)
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I do definitely see that intuition in your writing. You manage to write the subtleties in these characters SO well. Your tidbits of insight just make your stories so much deeper and more fun to read. I'm so glad you decided to start posting them!!
Wahoo! Can't wait to read it on Friday. :-D
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Everything's fine, a funeral is always sad, but it's one of those things that belongs to life. It was the partner of my aunt, and he was really suffering, so we are glad he isn't suffering anymore.
It's such a huge compliment for me to read that you believe my subtleties in in the characters make my story so much deeper and more fun to read.
And when I think back and were so afraid to post them. I can only say that you've all been so lovely and it was the best decision for me to just post them and see what happens.
BTW I love your FRAK NO icon, it's just perfect! And you're doing A/R icons now, yeah!
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I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter. :-D
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So within the hour I should have it posted.
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