On Top (Damon/Elena)

[upupa_epops]

Title: On Top
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 300
Prompt: fantasy, memory, top
For: PORN BATTLE
Spoilers: 4x10
Summary: Sex with Elena was nothing like he imagined, mostly because Damon isn't a complete masochist and he never actually let himself imagine it in detail.
A/N: I was literally shutting down my computer and going to

Comments

[lynnenne]

Awwwwwwww. So poignant.

torturing himself with his own voicemail like some magnificent moron

Hahahaha, yes. Perfect Damon voice.

[upupa_epops]

Well, those voicemails weren't very smart of him ;).

Thank you!

[badboy_fangirl]

on the feeling of Elena clenching around him and on her teeth playfully teasing his tigh. He makes it hot, makes himself make it hot,
Beta moment: I believe you mean THIGH, right?

But more than that, I love that he's just trying to make it about the physical feeling instead of all the ~vomity ~emotions he must have gone through by finally being able to physically express himself.

UGH.

HOW CAN PEOPLE NOT RELATE TO DAMON????? HE JUST WANTS SOMEONE TO LOVE HIM!

[upupa_epops]

Damn I hate my spelling. Thank you, edited!

He just has a lot of feelings, right? ;) One of my favorite things about him.

HOW CAN PEOPLE NOT RELATE TO DAMON????? HE JUST WANTS SOMEONE TO LOVE HIM!

I see what you do here ;).

[spuffy_noelle]

LOVE THIS ♥

his pace quick and brutal, he never liked it slow anyway.
No, he wouldn't cuz he's an impulsive asshole (in the very best way possible).

You really captured how hard Damon is on himself and how hard he wants to be, but ultimately isn't. LOVE THIS BOY.

[upupa_epops]

This boy is pathetic, gotta love him for it! <33333333333.

Thank you :).

[catteo]

Dude, I love this. It's so perfect. Poor Damon trying so hard to be the perfect gentleman when really he just wants to slam her up against a wall. Or, rather, BE slammed up against a wall.

[upupa_epops]

Not slamming up against walls, he can handle. But he just wants to hold her hand! ;)

Thank you :). I didn't even know you read D/E fic!

[catteo]

I read a whole heap but I am often terrible at leaving comments. Usually because I have the tabs open for about 4 weeks and then I forget that I haven't left a comment.

I'm definitely more D/E than S/E, but I'm basically all about angst and so a lot of fic that's out there is too happy for me. Ironically. But I have read a whole heap of your D/E and really enjoy it!

[upupa_epops]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed :).

I'm basically all about angst and so a lot of fic that's out there is too happy for me

I know the feeling :(.

[miss_blanche]

Magnificient, as per usual :)

[upupa_epops]

Thank you!