Clumsy hands in a dark room (Damon/Elena)

Jun 25, 2012 12:03

Title: clumsy hands in a dark room
Rating: NC17
For: Multi Fandom Comment Fic-a-thon / Icon-a-thon; Here is the repeated image of the lover destroyed. / Crossed out. / Clumsy hands in a dark room. Crossed out. prompted by fluffyfrolicker
Characters/Pairings: Damon/Elena
Warnings: This fic contains Damon.
Wordcount: 400
Summary: “You can't kiss me now,” Damon ( Read more... )

fanfiction: the vampire diaries

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badboy_fangirl June 25 2012, 17:12:46 UTC
This gives me feelings, but I'm not sure what they are. I shall return.

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badboy_fangirl June 25 2012, 19:52:53 UTC
I have returned. I had to go pick my roomie up at the airport, and I was thinking about this as I was driving, and it hit me! What you do, that is so lovely, is give us these snapshots of them together, and when I see these they don't feel quite right, but they don't feel quite wrong either, so I'm always mixed up as to how they work for me. I don't love them, but I don't hate them either, and it suddenly occurred to me why: it's not that I can't see Elena being this way, but I haven't gone on the journey with her to get to this place. Does that make sense? I want the before stuff. So, there you go. WRITE ALL THE FIC. :D

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upupa_epops June 26 2012, 11:46:19 UTC
I want the before stuff. So, there you go. WRITE ALL THE FIC. :D

I will!

Thank you for that :). I actually never wrote Elena in transition, but that's exactly what I'm writing in my tvdbigbang fic, so I need to pay attention to show the process properly.

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shipperjunkie June 25 2012, 18:57:29 UTC
I really like this! You know we don't see D/E the same, but I enjoy your writing and it certainly made me feel some feelings. ;p

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upupa_epops June 26 2012, 11:47:00 UTC
Thank you :). I'm glad you had feelings \o/.

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bogwitch June 25 2012, 21:47:04 UTC
Sorry about my last comment, my phone seemed to pick a random jornal to post it to.

This is lovely and very sad, for them both.

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upupa_epops June 26 2012, 11:47:45 UTC
Thank you! Lol, your last comment was so amusing! I swear, I spent HOURS trying to figure out what the hell you were referring to XD.

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bogwitch June 26 2012, 11:50:32 UTC
Oops! And those would be hours you can't get back. :/

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upupa_epops June 26 2012, 11:52:02 UTC
I don't want them back, they were fun!

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hisui_ryoshi June 25 2012, 22:48:42 UTC
This is interesting. I think you just proved to me that I want what I can't have. Because I can see Elena going to this dark place, and this is a beautiful example of that. It's excellent writing and I sympathize with Damon very much. I see this as much more likely than a happy ending.

I want my Damon/Elena fluff now.

But we all know Damon will take Elena any way he can get her, and he might just love her more broken like him. Excellent job.

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upupa_epops June 26 2012, 11:50:32 UTC
I think you just proved to me that I want what I can't have.

Oh, now you made me curious! What is it exactly that you want but can't have?

Ugh, fluff cravings. I have them :(.

But we all know Damon will take Elena any way he can get her, and he might just love her more broken like him.

Agreed. The question is, will she love herself more broken?

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vergoldung June 26 2012, 19:31:47 UTC
The question is, will she love herself more broken?
I second this question hard.

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mridul777 July 28 2012, 17:59:17 UTC

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upupa_epops July 29 2012, 10:58:39 UTC

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