Black Cat Ch.16

[upnabout]

Tittle: Black Cat
Author: up and about (upnabout) 
Band(s): alice nine, Lycaon, Aicle (through out)
Pairings/ characters: HirotoXShou, ToraXSaga, Nao, Yuuki, Emiru, Saran (through out)
Genre: MalexMale/ Life/ Prostitution
Disclaimer: I own nothing~ But the fic is mine T.T
Chapter: 13
Rating: PG-13, R, NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution/ MalexMale relationships/

Comments

[atearak]

you know, i always felt tempted to read this fic since you posted the first chapter, although this is the first chapter i read XD anyway! it's amazingg!! im going to read from the first chapter now~ >w

[upnabout]

(≧∇≦)/♡ Wah~ this makes me feel so happy! Thank you~ I hope you enjoy the beginning, too!

[atearak]

i finished reading the fic >w< i read everything in two days! i felt that i always wanted to read more! it's so amazing omg I really looking forward for the next chapters!! >W

My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[upnabout]

That makes me so happy! Really! thank you so much for reading <3 i always try to update every Sunday so be expecting a new chapter soon~ Once again, Thank you (´ε｀ )♡

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[atearak]

>w< im glad it makes you happy~ and please dont drop the fic ÇÇ many lj fic writers end up dropping amazing fics (though i know it's easy to lose interest in a story..)
I only have an advice for you, please don't take it personally I dont want to offend you, > < please be more careful with your spelling. it seems that sometimes you're in a hurry and make some spelling mistakes so if you feel you need more time to write and check your writings, please take your time~ (however, though you make spelling mistakes, you usually come up with some really advanced grammar structures ( • ̀ω•́ )✧) (i hope you dont get mad)

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[upnabout]

Not at all, i ask for people to tell me when i have mistakes so i can fix them and improve in my writing ^^ Yeah, lately i've had a lot going on and sometimes i just really need to zoom past these things. Or i just really need to get a beta~ i think a beta would be good because they can read it and see if something makes sense or not. i mean if i keep on re-reading it, my eyes will come numb to errors and i'll probably just skip over them ><

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[atearak]

Yeah, I know what you mean. If it's someone else doing it they might spot mistakes that you never noticed.
If you ever need help, I can help you if you need~ I've been busy lately, but I usually have some free time, so.. XD

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[upnabout]

Alright! Um if i ever have a really long chapter, i'll ask you if you can go over it =3 usually when there long, i have a lot more mistakes~ uh if you don't mind me asking, whats your time zone?

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[atearak]

oh no, I dont mind at all xD im from Portugal, GMT. Okay, just tell me when you need me to check anything and thank you for trusting me your story m(_ _)m

Re: My heart, it just burst (≧∇≦)

[upnabout]

no problem, thank you~