Just Sex [Ichigo/Rukia, NC-17]

Mar 30, 2011 20:27

It’s just sex, she reminds herself.

Rukia hisses, arching off the bed, her heels digging into the mattress. Ichigo’s hands are large and hot and good as he touches her, dragging his palms beneath her dress, up her thighs, past her hip bones. He breathes her name, sloppily, sucking and biting her sensitive earlobe.

Her arms are around his back, hands ( Read more... )

bleach: oneshots, p: ichigo/rukia

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dayofcaligula March 31 2011, 11:38:27 UTC
Bravo! I love the sex and I appreciate the story you made about them. Good stories like these boosts my creative juices up. Thank you for this!

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unwritten_icons March 31 2011, 14:22:47 UTC
Thanks for the feedback :)

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san_toki April 1 2011, 17:15:51 UTC
Sounds like Rukia is lying to herself a bit there. I liked it, fast paced and horny teenagers sounds right for them.

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unwritten_icons April 1 2011, 18:10:31 UTC
Thanks a lot for the review! :3

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tyrackwolfii April 2 2011, 22:54:11 UTC
Ah, Rukia, Rukia, Rukia... you're in such denial. But that's what we adore about you. X3

This is very well-written, my fellow comrade. The way you wrote it is nice and subtle, too, which is a nice contrast to Rukia's need to be rough in bed. Kudos! <3

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unwritten_icons April 2 2011, 23:43:06 UTC
Exactly. I love Rukia, and I can only hope I can giver her justice in my fics.

Thanks, I always try to make things subtle, I don't like "telling" things in a story, I want the reader to decide for themselves. Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot.

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