Comments | untappedbeauty: FIC: Ready For More -- Ryan/Jon, NC-17

untappedbeauty

FIC: Ready For More -- Ryan/Jon, NC-17

Jun 23, 2008 22:35

The last of the ficlet requests, for airgiodslv: Bottom!Jon!!! Yeah, she won the drawing on this one and got an actual full-blown PWP...though it does get a little mushy near the end. ARE MY PREFERENCES SHOWING?

Ready For More
Ryan/Jon, NC-17, ~2,500 words
( Ryan's never been one to focus especially on the visuals of sex. He likes the feel, of course, the smell of sweat and come, doesn't even mind the salty flavor of both on his tongue. But he loves, loves the sounds. )

fic, boys in the band

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disarm_d June 24 2008, 04:00:45 UTC

Oh man, Ryan's monstercock! I seriously, seriously love the way you started this story. Jon/Ryan is suuuuch an amazing paring. Uggg, and then they were so, so sweet! ♥

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 07:52:59 UTC

I loooooove Ryan's monstercock, and it plus bottom!Jon is one of my faaaaavorite combinations! I am glad you liked them here! They are both filthy AND sweet, which I know I certainly like. :)

...Wow, I need an updated Ryan/Jon icon, I think. Hmm.

aerynvala June 24 2008, 04:09:50 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwww *draws little hearts* That's soooo sweet! and also really hot I loved it :)

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 07:56:37 UTC

Yay for hot AND sweet! Thank you! It was supposed to be pure porniness, but then they got all sappy, because this was their screwed up way of making it official that they are together and aren't going to fuck around on each other and therefore don't need condoms anymore. :D

aerynvala June 24 2008, 07:59:49 UTC

See, but here's the thing, particularly with the Panic kids: "everyone is gay" and huge heapings of sap are just more believable than not in this fandom. These boys *are* sappy little buggers and it's AWESOME.

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 08:05:04 UTC

*sighs happily* Honestly, every day I'm in bandom, I feel so lucky, because I love it so much and can't imagine there's a better fandom in the world to be a part of. The talented people we build these worlds around, as well as our fellow fans are just AMAZING.

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melted_snowdrop June 24 2008, 04:12:25 UTC

the world does not have enough of bottom!jon. seriously... why can't people see the light?

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 07:57:13 UTC

I do not know! Believe me, if I could make everyone see the light on bottom!Jon, there'd be a fuck of a lot of it EVERYWHERE.

overloved June 24 2008, 04:16:35 UTC

what a fun sexy time!!

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 07:57:30 UTC

Hee! Thank you!

slowlikewine June 24 2008, 04:56:56 UTC

You're killing me with the fic tonight. Seriously, you gotta stop it. I have to work in the morning! I cannot be all twitchy from your ridiculously hot cockhungry!Jon porn all night!

Man. The descriptions in this fic were just insane. Ryan's attention to the sights and the smells and the tastes and the sounds OMG of sex just about did me in. It's like he was (and this is not going to make any sense whatsoever), but it's like he was fucking Jon with his whole body, not just his cock. His fingers and his lips and his tongue and all his senses and especially, especially his heart. Which. Sounds hilarious. But you know what I mean.

*sigh* So lovely.

OKAY BUT NO MORE!! I CANNOT STAY UP ALL NIGHT READING PORN. TELL ALL YOUR FRIENDS.

Except I'm a greedy slut just like Jon and I'll take whatever you give me and say please and thank you. ;)

untappedbeauty June 24 2008, 08:01:41 UTC

Whoops! Didn't mean to kill you. This was the last of the fic, though, for now! But SERIOUSLY, work be damned! There is always call for cockhungry!Jon!

Also, can I snuggle you for a minute? Because DUUUUUDE, that is the best thing ever, what you thought about the descriptions. I am feeling sappy now myself, because Ryan was TOTALLY fucking Jon with every part of himself, heart included. GOD, they are so sweet even when they're filthy together.

And YOU are AWESOME. Thank you so, so much! I want to take your feedback with me and read it over and over because you just GOT it, and that is so happy-making.

As long as you are polite, it is fine for you to be a greedy slut. I happen to be one myself, at least when it comes to this band, NGH.

slowlikewine June 24 2008, 19:14:33 UTC

So what if I was a little sleep deprived at work today, it was well worth it. I'm pretty sure I added everything you posted last night to my memories, seriously, you were just on.

Also, I kind of want to add cockhungry!Jon to my interest now. Is that wrong? hehe

Yeah, last night I felt like all I did was slobber all over your fics. So, um, thanks? hehe

untappedbeauty June 25 2008, 09:09:16 UTC

SLOBBER AS MUCH AS YOU WANT. You make me PREEN, bb!

Dude, ADD IT! I have bottom!Jon as one of my interests! Not wrong at all. :)

And awww, I hope you get more sleep tonight. *pets you*

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