give me some feedback?

Jun 08, 2012 13:58

I'm looking for feedback on the fifteen icons below the cut. Concrit is welcomed. Don't hold back. You can comment annonymously if you'd wish. I'm putting these up for havers to give me feedback on, but I'll take anyone's feedback. So... (and you don't have to comment about each one. I'm looking for ways to improve.)

bring it on... )

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dreamsofkate June 9 2012, 09:57:52 UTC
i have always loved your icons, however I will give concrit on what I would do. Don't think I don't love your work, if I didn't I wouldn't bother with a comment much less 15 of them

1. really good crop but its a little grainy (is it a low quality cap?) and lots of contrast. I would mute the colors a little and fix up some little spots of coloring. Also I would clone the color from the right of kathryn to the left as well. its a pretty color

2.Love the composition of this. I have this problem sometimes where my background is more textured than my person. Its happened a little here. I would introduce some subtle noise to kathryn and sharpen her, or I would smooth the background

3. a little busy and it just need... something. Unfortunately I don't know what that is

4. I would darken the left side of bobby's face and make him a little less greeny yellow

5. You could brighten it a bit but its pretty much perfect

6. I would darken the face a little to bring out the details

7. Maybe blur the background a bit? Nice crop

8. Love this icon, maybe a little darker for the details but this and 5 are my favs

9. Darken a little to bring out details

10. Like the crop. Maybe sharpen (but i often over sharpen my icons so maybe dont listen to me)

11. Very contrasted, I would try to make this one more natural.

12. Very interesting icon, maybe a bit more color?

13. Like this, wouldn't change it

14. Love this, wouldn't change it

15. Don't know whats going on here but it works :)

Feel free to ignore these, my opinion is subjective and really you need to be happy with these icons much more then I do, but hope it helps.
Please note i have a new computer and my screen gives more contrast than my last one, so some of these may just be me

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untapdtreasure June 9 2012, 14:53:43 UTC
hey! i love all your suggestions :D this is exactly what i wanted :D thank you!

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