LOST - This open sky is painted blue

Aug 19, 2010 20:40

Title: This open sky is painted blue
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer; Sawyer/Juliet
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine. Neither is Ben Lee (title).
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 920
Summary: She screwed up her placement test on purpose. Just goes to show you, everyone's got a self-destructive streak.
A/N: A very late offering for former Queen hitlikehammers, who wanted 'Greatest ( Read more... )

fanfic, rating: pg-13, character: james "sawyer" ford, table: un_love_you, fanfic: lost, pairing: sawyer/juliet, character: juliet burke, luau 2010

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angela_weber August 20 2010, 03:50:46 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

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ozmissage August 20 2010, 02:58:07 UTC
OMG, I love this so, so much. It's so beautiful and there's this undercurrent of sadness to watching them come together. I love this bit:

That night's the first. Two months later and they've started holding hands in public. Just to spite Miles, he and Juliet set up house in three.

This sense of camaraderie this implies makes me incredibly happy. And then this: Cabin fever. Island fever. Whatever. He orders funny books for her on purpose because he likes the way the empty rooms echo when she laughs.

GUH. You have an incredible Sawyer voice. Amazing fic, my dear.

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angela_weber August 20 2010, 03:53:04 UTC
Yay, thank you so much for the fantastic comment! I'm so glad you liked it, especially the Sawyer voice--he's really tricky for me! Thank you! :D

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angela_weber August 20 2010, 03:54:48 UTC
Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked the Sawyer voice, because I do struggle with him. :) Thanks very much again for reading and commenting! :D ♥

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cantbesilent August 20 2010, 03:35:24 UTC
oh my god I can't believe you wrote this! What a lovely surprise right before I go to bed! I thought you tried to avoid Sawyer at any cost! What muse took hold of you and can they stay around longer!? But this is perfect, just perfect. Very honest and true to who these two were, both together and as individuals, and I am just obsessed with his observations on her in this. Especially He orders funny books for her on purpose because he likes the way the empty rooms echo when she laughs. because YES, canon, I could see it so clearly and I think I read it four times I loved it so much. Ohhhhh, otp you are precious. I am so jealous of this fic, you killed me.



eta because I just reread it and Her favorite books are his favorites, too. made me make funny noises because yessssss and I love this because of what it IMPLIES and how it fits in to everything that is canon and also everything that I'v made up as personal canon, lol (which is a lot ;) ). You have such a talent for implications and your writing is always so subtle, you are so ( ... )

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angela_weber August 20 2010, 04:01:37 UTC
RIGHT? I'm just as shocked as you are, haha, you know how complex my feelings re: Sawyer are. And also my feelings about writing this ship. I'm soooo glad you liked this, seriously, because you have got such a good feel for them and when I write them I feel kinda like I'm stumbling around in the dark vomiting cliches, lol. Anyway, thank you so much for the AWESOME comment! Really, I'm very very happy you liked it! :D :D

I was going to mention a certain novel by one Stephen King but I thought that might be a little heavy-handed, so. ;) I'm thrilled you liked that part. Always happy to serve your personal canon! :D

♥♥

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op_de_radio August 20 2010, 23:51:38 UTC
I just loved this. It was perfect and lovely. :)

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angela_weber August 21 2010, 23:46:19 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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