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[23] hungover [Wooyoung/Junho]

Apr 11, 2014 01:19

Fic Title: hungover
Main Character: Wooyoung
Pairing: Wooyoung/Junho
Warnings: Peripheral drinking and drug use.
Word count: 1,281

Prompt 1: How you balance being Batman, Bruce Wayne? (line from J. Cole's "Head Bussa")
Prompt 2: http:// ( Read more... )

main: wooyoung, pairing: wooyoung/junho, round 1

Comments 9

jessdislikesjam April 11 2014, 09:30:16 UTC

I STILL CANNOT EVEN DEAL WITH THIS AND IT'S MY FIFTH READ THROUGH SO STUNNING I-
/leaves to gather her thoughts

jessdislikesjam April 13 2014, 09:14:42 UTC

I think I've finally gathered my thoughts enough to attempt coherency but really this is just really spectacular, you have a strong style and a flowing vocabulary and you bring life to your characters in subtle but overwhelmingly effective way.

I think you got Wooho completely in character and also sobs at baby Jonghyun cameo because his character was actually my favourite. Congrats Author-nim this was perfect ♡

mo_chan_tf April 12 2014, 14:32:06 UTC

I- I- HOW DO I EVEN- WHAT CAN I SAY OMG
/flails/
I'm stunned.
This is AMAZING omgomgomg.
The way you go forward and back and how you give little details that let us wonder about what Wooyoung's doing and why he's there and.
ugh ugh ugh this is so well tied together, the fact that it's so short makes it all the more powerful because- you wrote everything that needed to be written yet we still thirst for more.
I'm just. Speechless.
I lovelovelove this.
Thank you so much for writing.

anonymous April 13 2014, 08:37:56 UTC

Wow. This is really impressive. Wooho fics are hard to come by and good wooho fics are even harder. I love the built-up of this fic, where everything was slowly revealed and of course, your style of writing and how emotions flow within words. It was a really good read although it broke my heart but my feels- I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing this. Looking forward to more of your work!! ♥♥

ext_2399979 April 13 2014, 18:28:26 UTC

SO AMAZING! When I got to the end I was about ready to hammer my fist on the table and swear CAUSE I WANTED MORE but all I could do was read again from the beginning and try to soak up more of this poetry. So extremely well done, both plot and language and how the beginning connects with the end (I love stories where the first is the last and the other way around;;;;)

Fascinated with how you put EVERYTHING into this, emotion and fun and sex and play and betrayal somehow, making the reading experience so dense and rich.. yeah I don't know what else to say but to plead my undying awe. Thank you <333333

mychocotango April 15 2014, 22:46:55 UTC

whoa, what did i just read??

mychocotango April 15 2014, 22:51:53 UTC

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOD.
this sucks me in right from the first go and the way youre telling it is just ;A; hold up, i need to breatheeeeeee cos im holding my breath so much while reading everything. this is so gooooood. the pain the betrayal ze loooooove ;;;;;;;;; im so torn right now ide.
absolutely wonderful read. thankyou for writing this and looking forward to read more of your work o/