fic: Just hear this and then I'll go

Jul 01, 2008 00:12

Just hear this and then I'll go by Beezus
Pete/Mikey | explicit | 1,000+ words

Been sitting on this sucker for awhile now, but I think this is it. Not a prequel or a sequel, but set in the same universe as Like all things, fades. It seems I have only one small story to tell about these two, so pardon the repetition.

kiss me out of desire, babe, and not consolation. )

chemicalromanced, falloutboys, fictions by beezus, 2008

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gigantic July 1 2008, 06:27:29 UTC
This. Yes, this.

You have this way of describing actions in a way that makes me jealous, dude. Lines like: The skin on Pete's shoulder tastes like chlorine and Mikey's thoughts flicker like a radio, fade to static, before he snaps back when Pete starts talking, panting, "Let me. Let me, I want to. Oh, please I want--"

I can picture it so perfectly. Gah. How are you so good?

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unprolific July 1 2008, 15:15:49 UTC
*HANDS*

you are far to nice to me, miss, but i'll take the compliment all the same.

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unprolific July 1 2008, 15:23:30 UTC
HAHAHA. when you quote lines back to me, it reminds me how gross i am about them.

KOFFfrankmikeysekritotpKOFFKOFF

AND I LU.

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riflethrough July 1 2008, 06:51:23 UTC
I love this, and the first one, a lot. Especially Frank's concern and how Mikey reacts to it.

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unprolific July 1 2008, 22:31:09 UTC
thank you so much!

yeah, frank's concern stems from my own personal cannon that frankie iero doesn't like that pete wentz character very much at all. that on top of the fact that i think the dude is a big advocate for protecting his "family". little fists of fury!

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cass404 July 1 2008, 09:41:04 UTC
I *just* reread Like All Things, Fades yesterday and was wishing there was another glimpse into them. And? There is now!

and Mikey knows it's going to leave marks.

Mikey figures it's a metaphor for this whole fucking summer, though.

::happy sigh::

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unprolific July 1 2008, 22:33:38 UTC
awww, thank you! i'm kind of a nut about that story, so i'm always pleased an embarrassing amount when anyone else digs it.

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ffairy_tale July 6 2008, 13:47:37 UTC
Wow.. I love the way you write. After all the sol's I've read, you just.. it's just as good as first time.

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unprolific July 7 2008, 04:04:14 UTC
that's the best of all compliments! thank you so much.

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