Comments | unphoenix: fic: I Thought (2/2)

unphoenix

fic: I Thought (2/2)

Jan 18, 2008 20:36

Title: I Thought
Word Count: 14,387
Rating: R, possibly NC-17
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, though the canon girlfriends make an appearance
Disclaimer: Trust me, if I owned these boys they would not be doing each other. Also, if this is true, then I'm going to have to see if I can read other peoples' minds as well.
Summary: In the beginning, the Thing ( Read more... )

Comments 32

mandy_croyance January 19 2008, 06:45:09 UTC

Sexy! Angsty! OTP! What more could a girl want?

I especially loved how it started back in the apartment days (which is seriously one of my favourite and the most underrated settings for panic fic) which it being a way for the two of them to relief all the stress they were under. And that it started off with thing like handjobs.

I also love how you used it to explain the NRWC monologue. That really worked for me.

unphoenix January 19 2008, 08:40:06 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.^^ I agree, I love the idea of them during the apartment days, when they were all teeny and adorable. I mean, that's such a huge part of what shaped them. Also, I'm glad you liked the monologue part...I wasn't sure about that when I first wrote it, but I kept it in nonetheless.

ierorly January 19 2008, 09:07:42 UTC

eeeee! flail!

♥

unphoenix January 19 2008, 19:18:00 UTC

*grins* I'm going to take that as a good sign.

sori1773 January 19 2008, 17:09:25 UTC

oh, excellent! angsty and wonderful and I love how much the entire band just loves each other here. so awesome!

unphoenix January 19 2008, 19:20:21 UTC

Thanks so much!^^

pinkstarrypants January 20 2008, 19:44:33 UTC

Yeah I really loved this. Loved the ideas within it and about all they had to deal with. You made it really realistic and full of angst, love and a bit of sex! Awesome! X

unphoenix January 20 2008, 20:10:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm especially glad you thought it realistic.

samedifference_ January 20 2008, 23:32:38 UTC

This is really great. First, I *love* stories that have kind of a past/present/future frame to them.

The way this builds to the final scene seems really realistic to me. I like that what starts out as friends with benefits turns into something more without either of them really realizing it.

The stuff about the NRWC monologue being an accident threw me off (in a good way) because I had never thought of it like that. I think it works really well within the context of this story.

Oh, and hi! I found this through a random del.icio.us tag search and I'm trying to be better about leaving feedback, because I know you guys live on this stuff. haha.

unphoenix January 21 2008, 02:29:55 UTC

I'm glad everything worked for you so well. The monologue thing just kind of...happened as I was writing it. Kind of how it just...happened for Brendon in the story, I suppose.

Also, hi! Nice to meet you. You're right, I definitely do live off of feedback, just like all us fic writers. It makes me feel guilty when I forget to leave feedback, actually. Anyway, thank you very much for doing so.