Birds of a Feather prompt from The Flame

Feb 01, 2010 18:07



He lounges on a chair at the back of the class. The teacher constantly glares at the group of boys in the corner, his group of boys. Though the teacher’s lesson is an important part of their education, the boys ignore it. They talk about the girls in the class, labeling and objectifying them. Like parrots, the boys make the same comments and ( Read more... )

friendship, the flame, birds of a feather, school, romance

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unnameduntamed February 3 2010, 01:31:17 UTC
Thanks very much

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lacruciverbiste February 3 2010, 00:37:03 UTC
Very cute! I love the "kookaburra laughter" description. Quite original.

Good luck this week!

~Kate

http://lacruciverbiste.livejournal.com/7633.html

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unnameduntamed February 3 2010, 01:31:45 UTC
Thank you very much
Good luck to you too!

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vyvyan_wilde February 7 2010, 17:25:06 UTC
Great take on the prompt; what a cute story. I like the descriptions of how the kids interact and their behaviors.

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unnameduntamed February 8 2010, 20:29:09 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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sue_bridehead February 7 2010, 21:39:52 UTC
What a sweet little story. Thanks for sharing this!

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unnameduntamed February 8 2010, 20:29:30 UTC
Thank you for reading it :)

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Re: Edit! unnameduntamed February 8 2010, 20:30:49 UTC
Thank you very much for your help! :)

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