[FIC] - Out Loud - Uruha/Hiroto|Uruha/Reita? - PG-13 - Oneshot

[unna_rainchaser]

Title: Out Loud
Author: unna_rainchaser
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angry, angsty, tell me.
Pairings: Uruha/Hiroto, Uruha/Reita?
Disclaimer: Not mine, no harm intended.
Comments: A scene.

Comments

[lazedfantasy]

Oh. Oh.
Oh.
*speechless*

Here, (pon)2 cookies for you~~

[cateris]

...oh dear...YOU WROTE DRAMA!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You just made baby Ruki CRY!

Ok. So IT'S DEFINITELY bright and clear as the sunlight that Uruha actually loves MADLY Reita (AS MUCH AS I WOULD TOTALLY WANT A URUHA/HIROTO FIC FROM YOU!!! - i have a strange thing for this pairing LOL) and now he finally has a reason to force his hand. Uruha gives Reita one last chance. He wants to see if the other loves him back AT LEAST how much Uruha loves him. Reita looks realistic and mature and try to bring reason into Uruha, but...he's not as desperate as Uruha would have wanted him to be...

It is obvious Reita has feelings for Uruha, but they have some issues in this relationship we can just only assume.

Reita lost it, too. "But how can you be so sure?" His voice was loud and rough.

"Love is something to believe in!" Sincere, but he sounded hurt, so hurt.Apparently Uruha was the only one trying to work things out in their relationship, was the only one making sacrifices and all sorts of

[unna_rainchaser]

I, personally, felt like stepping into a room of a fighting couple. I was just playing Warcraft, fishing happily, but then they were just all up in my head, yelling and screaming and pushandpull... I closed the game and opened LJ to write it down asap. I just wrote down what happened in my head, lacking whatever happened before and everything past the "I'm leaving." from Uruha.

As shown by the age of Hiroto this is set five years in the past, in which - so I got told by interviews - Uruha and Reita might still have been living together.

I got the impression (when I wrote this) that Reita was very much in love with Uruha but never had the guts to act on it, maybe he did once being drunk, but we all know that that just makes things worse. Now, that Uruha found someone ho had the guts to act freely on his feelings, he wants it. If he only wants to feel loved or if he wants to push Reita into action, I don't know.

This is such a screwed up relationship, emotion-wise, I don't really know how to help them.

[cateris]

I, personally, felt like stepping into a room of a fighting couple.

yesyes, that's what I said too in the first scenario :) (I forgot thought to use more coherent and TO THE POINT words - lol)

As shown by the age of Hiroto this is set five years in the past, in which - so I got told by interviews - Uruha and Reita might still have been living together.

AWWWWWWWW!!!!! *+thank you for the bonus information ;); reading actual interviews is something that I barely manage in the Gazette fandom*

This is such a screwed up relationship, emotion-wise, I don't really know how to help them.

You don't have to help them, don't worry. This was perfect just as it is. The quality of this snippet, of this powerful flash-insight in this couple, this moment, stands exactly in the fact that we don't know anything about both past and future. We just have this present, this second, and it manages to speak by itself quite boldly. For me it's a closed circle just as it is.

I got the impression (when I wrote this) that Reita was very much in love with

[unna_rainchaser]

No, there's no finished school or whatever, I just had no muses at all since spring. I have no idea why, but I just couldn't write more then maybe one fic a month, which annoyed me greatly. Now my muses are comming back, one by one, I'll soon start to write the Jrock Children Series again, Shaped and tons of scenes. Maybe some porn :P.

I do that too, reading through archives, looking for a fic that could inspire me to write it the right way (yes, my ego makes me write).

Long story short: there will be more and more stories from me soon~

And, not to forget, your comments make me very, very happy :3.

[kawasakininja]

This, this has a strange vibe. I don't mean your writing, but the piece itself. The dialogue, I don't know how to explain it, I don't even know what exactly do I think of it. Just maybe it is like the whole dialogue is lies. Like there is truth underneath of it, but you can't get to it, because what they're saying to each other is in the way.

Maybe, I thought Reita was maybe closer to honesty here, but not very much, just I loved the subtle change from Uruha to Kouyou, there were some emotions, some honesty there. But there was also resentment (I think?), calling Hiroto sixteen, which okay he might not have thought about what his real age was, but it was still a bit passive aggressive?

And Uruha, from the way he was talking about Hiroto declaring his love to him, I got this uncomfortable feeling that he personally is more in love with the idea of Hiroto being in love, in love with the love itself, than he was in love with Hiroto. Or you know, maybe it was just my subconscious Reita/Uruha bias :)

[n3uromanc3r]

Oh, it was really intense and really beautiful!

Thank you!

[13garbo67]

in your stories Uruha and Hiroto are just perfect