Last defeat

[unmeiboy]

Last defeat
Danno/Kiriki (Drama: BAD BOYS J)
pwp, 3064 words, NC-17. Non-con/rape
“This is not about friendship. It's not about cooperating. It's about Hiroshima. About being at the top of this city.”
Written for h_itoshi, who wanted not-friends Danno/Kiriki. It just ended up like this.

Comments

[chained_akame]

ASdfghjkjhgsfghjklkjhgfghj I almost missed this one, how could I. I've been waiting to read a Danno/Kiriki fic ever since the first BBJ episodes and well...even though this wasn't exactly what I had in mind, I'm still happy XD

Ok, now to the actual fic: I felt really really sorry for Tsukasa, but asdfghjjhgffg the way you wrote Danno somehow has sth very captivating (and I actually really wonder how did you get the idea of it). While I certainly don't approve of what he did, it felt nice to read a situation where you can actually see him having the upper hand in terms of strength and all (because I'm tired of seeing him being the side-character in the drama even though he's the top) and I could also totally picture Tsukasa's face and reactions while reading it.

So in case this is not clear, I liked it XD I would have liked it even more if it was just rough sex and not rape, but still, that was very well-written :)

[unmeiboy]

I'm glad it was good enough even though it wasn't what you would have preferred, haha!

Danno... Basically, I wanted to make him fierce and determined, I think? And cold. In the drama we didn't see him acting on emotion, really, so I tried to build him on that too. I guess in a way, he's the opposite of Tsukasa.
And yeah it's as you say, he's the top of Hiroshima, but there wasn't a lot about him in the drama. :(

Thank you! It would indeed have been more enjoyable if it wasn't non-con, I totally agree. It just ended up this way :x

[h_itoshi]

I'm not even going to apologize for loving this even though it's non-con because down with friendly friendship!!
And because every. single. thing. that Danno says is so fucking hot. HE is hot. And the blood on the shirt, I was like @___@ when I read that haha.

Also, it's very drama-accurate (well adapted? Good setting?) imo. Feels like that could have been a very explicit scene some creepy writer didn't get to film.

[unmeiboy]

Yeah. Well. I know you. D;

I tried hard to make him hot. I mean he's hot as fuck in the drama but writing is difficult lol so I'm glad I succeeded!

And that feels good to hear tbh. I didn't want to go too off drama setting and write something that wouldn't fit at all.