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Jul 31, 2007 00:03

title: fallen rose petals
pairing: owen hargreaves/michael carrick
rating: g
author's note: this came about randomly today, when i had the craving to write something (anything). i initially made the banner first, not knowing i would actually write them in the end, but as i found myself finishing, i had become more attached to this idea more than ( Read more... )

owen/michael, fic, owen hargreaves, michael carrick, rating:g

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bergusia July 31 2007, 07:30:30 UTC
FIRST! XD I'm off reading now. *is excited*

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bergusia July 31 2007, 07:58:03 UTC
Honey, I seriously don't know where to begin. This is so amazing, it leaves me speechless. Seriously. I really love how you started every passage about a new stage of life with "You remember..." - it's oh so lovely.

+ The feel of the leather against your smooth hands This description is for someone who played Basketball for quite some time like the most beautiful music in my ears.

+ ... and the stories were like fairytales. *sighs*

+ You watched your family disappear from view Is there anything more heartbreaking than this? *sniffles* I love that you wrote it in such a way, that everybody can actually relate (and share the pain).

+ You walked around like a ghost; invisible, almost. *sniffles* Poor Owen, alone in Germany. *sighs* I think I should stop quoting now. It's getting cheesy...

+ And it was that quiet, understanding stance of his that made you start to see him as more than just a friend. Oh my, that line is just... *can't find any words* The idea of them understanding each other and connecting with each other without ( ... )

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kobean August 3 2007, 03:40:28 UTC
i really wish i could write something to show you how absolutely speechless and honoured i am with this review. i really wish. so i'll just settle with, you're amazing, and i have this huge smile across my face - all because of you. thank you, thank you! this means so much to me. *hugs*

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hiro_chan July 31 2007, 07:34:34 UTC
*keels over*

nnngggghhhhhhh, so lovely. love them as a pairing (they make a nice pair, really, very easy on the eyes too) and nice timing too for you to write it, because who know we might see them in the middle of the field this sunday X3X3~! nice take on both of them. love the background you gave on owen also, because it gave more story to the whole fic (does that makes sense *g*??). and the ending, the mood of it and everything.

just... lovely.

and aren't you on a roll right now XD? i've been trying to finish this one single fic and i didn't get much futher in trying to finishing it and yet, you girl, postel lots of drabbles and now this.

can i just say, i hope your muse keeps on kicking XD?

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kobean August 3 2007, 03:38:20 UTC
thank you, thank you! :) you are lovely. i don't even know where this story came from. kind of random, really. so glad you enjoyed it! :D

oh goodness. i think my muse finally has slowed down, and took a vacation. LOL. but i hope yours comes back soon. im going through withdrawals!

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kobean August 3 2007, 03:29:55 UTC
i am speechless. *blushes* thank you so much. ♥

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kiwiliqueur July 31 2007, 07:49:12 UTC
Gahhhhh! *falls over dead*
I swear you could write almost any pairing and I'd like it.
I'm starting to love how Owen could fit into the United harlem dynamic.

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kobean August 3 2007, 03:35:04 UTC
srsly. owen is slowly becoming the slut of united. rotfl.
♥ so glad you enjoyed it, my love!

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kiwiliqueur August 3 2007, 03:37:26 UTC
*thinks* hmmm this might be true. someone has to take over from smudge now might as well be the new kid XD

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parallelkites July 31 2007, 08:39:26 UTC
Utterly gorgeous, my dear. x

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kobean August 3 2007, 03:30:13 UTC
thank you, my love. so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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