Oh oh loving the plot~ Joongie seems so cute^^ But Yun and the twins situation seem complicated >.< Kind of got an idea of what really happened~ Can't wait for more :)
So Yongwoong is Jaejoong's father, he is in love with his twin sister Ara and Yunho is none the wiser besides a foggy memory and thinking the two were too close.
But as long as he had ties with the madia, such dream could never come true.
Think you mean mafia hun.
You might want to proof this or have a beta look at it cause u got quite a few errors but nonetheless I'm loving this so far!
I actually already proofed this just now ;D but still thank you for pointing that out. there might be a few more errors but I'm too tired right now to go over it again. You pretty much laid out what all of chapter 1 is all about hahaa.
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Joongie seems so cute^^
But Yun and the twins situation seem complicated >.<
Kind of got an idea of what really happened~
Can't wait for more :)
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But as long as he had ties with the madia, such dream could never come true.
Think you mean mafia hun.
You might want to proof this or have a beta look at it cause u got quite a few errors but nonetheless I'm loving this so far!
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And Jaejoong was so cute ^__^
I love this already :) ♥
Can't wait for moarr xD
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