Stargate Atlantis, Day 14: Firsts: First kiss, first love, first fliration, first... by Moosesal

Dec 14, 2008 16:41

Title: First Love, Flying
Author: moosesal
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay (with at touch of John/Atlantis)
Prompt: Day 14 - Firsts: First kiss, first love, first flirtation, first…
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 1560
Spoilers: none
Summary: Some of John’s first impressions after meeting Rodney and going to Atlantis.
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elizaria December 15 2008, 00:22:45 UTC
Oh, I definitely liked this. I particularly loved this
He was still that loud, brash, fucking know-it-all he'd been in Antarctica, but he was growing on John. Like a fungus.

A delicious, thirty-five-dollars-a-pound fungus. But a fungus.

A tall, broad-shouldered, blue-eyed fungus. But still. A fungus.
because even as it's funny it's adorable cause I can so see John look at Rodney that way.

And the scene in the jumper - laughter turning into so much hot. Rodney's reaction felt spot on for worrying about the tech at the same time as he's ogling John.

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moosesal December 15 2008, 01:17:19 UTC
The fungus thing just wrote itself. And I worried about it being too much but it just cracked me up so much, I had to keep it. I'm glad you liked. It's always good to have someone like your jokes.

And yay for the hotness. :)

Thanks for reading.

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beadattitude December 15 2008, 22:50:56 UTC
No, it's perfect. I can hear him drawling this to himself and giving Rodney wary eyebrows and shrugging.

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moosesal December 15 2008, 23:38:01 UTC
:) Thanks.

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danceswithgary December 15 2008, 00:34:48 UTC
A wonderful set of firsts. :-D

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moosesal December 15 2008, 01:16:16 UTC
Thank you.

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turnonmyheels December 15 2008, 16:28:53 UTC
Lovely.

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winter_elf December 15 2008, 18:10:25 UTC
Ohhh.... Nice set of 'Firsts' as well as some smoking hot Jumper sex!! :)

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dossier December 15 2008, 18:16:54 UTC
Rodney as a truffle: brilliant!

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