Fic: No Regrets, Part 4

Sep 09, 2010 02:01

Part 4: Proud

Sam never bunched his shirts up into balls when he stuffed them into the hamper. Actually, he didn’t stuff them at all; he folded them over an arm and gently laid them in the hamper, as if wrinkling them there would somehow affect how they would come back from the dry cleaners later that week.

Sam was very ritualistic in ( Read more... )

breakfast with scot

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flavigny September 10 2010, 13:16:41 UTC
DIE DIE DIE. OMG. THIS WAS FANTASTIC. :D And I like how in-character your Eric was the whole time. I like the short proposal and then how he explained Sam that it was his turn to come first (oooh, naughty double entendre ;D) and it was so perfect.

I said it before and will say it again: PLEASE KEEP WRITING THESE! BwS needs more fics and maybe one day I'll also start participating. This fandom is so underrated, there is so much to explore!

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unavez18 September 10 2010, 19:29:12 UTC
:-) Thanks! So there's one more half-finished pre-movie fic on my hardrive ... I'll see if I can get to it in the next week or so. You should definitely post some fics! The few of us who are interested in the movie could maybe form a community to post in so that others could find fics more easily when looking for them

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firstyoufall December 4 2010, 22:19:12 UTC
I agree so fully with everything she says. :D
This was beautiful. /wibbles/

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unavez18 December 4 2010, 23:42:28 UTC
Aw, thanks :)

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tiny_cupcake September 11 2010, 02:53:09 UTC
again, i loved it. and @flavigny definitely post something! I just posted my first and I know it isn't up to standard but I'm trying my hand at it...I have a few more that I need to make less horrible (not sure I'll make them completely not terrible, though). Unavez, you are SUCH a great writer and all I can say is keep 'em coming!

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unavez18 September 15 2010, 00:25:57 UTC
oops, forgot to reply to this, but thanks, as always!

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unavez18 September 14 2010, 00:58:55 UTC
Sorry for my ignorance, but what song is that?

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nyteflyer September 14 2010, 03:30:06 UTC
"Once, a very long time ago, he remembered promising Sam that he would never break his heart. Now he wondered if maybe he hadn’t been breaking it just a little bit every day" -- loved that part, because that's the heart of it, after all. Eric stayed focused on himself for so long, but now he's finally opened himself up enough to truly understand what Sam's been going through. Very nice progression, and I hope it continues!

I gotta say, I'm usually deathly allergic to kidfic, but you achieve a nice balance in your stories, and it's especially cool that it's Scot who helps Eric finally begin to mature. Cool stuff as always!

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unavez18 September 15 2010, 00:24:49 UTC
Thanks! Now that you mention it, I don't think my kids are characters so much as catalysts . . . with BWS at least that kinda makes sense since Eric's change begins in the movie through his relationship w/ Scot

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miseriesbusines January 1 2011, 16:16:05 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I'm actually crying! I figured out what the present was and I honestly spent the whole time in between bouncing in my chair!!! I loooove this story!!! Thank you so much for posting it!!! :D

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unavez18 January 1 2011, 18:18:57 UTC
Aw, yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I get super excited for comments since this is such a tiny fandom :) Thanks for reading!

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miseriesbusines January 2 2011, 00:45:30 UTC
Oh, I know!!! The size of this fandom it MISERABLE!!!! I love reading on FF.N but they don't even have a category, and I had to google "breakfast with scot fanfiction" only to come up with about three pages -including your lj.

It's such a shame it's so small because this really is such a great movie! :D

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tiny_cupcake January 4 2011, 05:47:00 UTC
Join the fun in the tiny (yet growing) in bfastwithscot

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