Now and Forever...Itsumademo... - Chapter 23

[unare_haineko]

Title: Now and Forever…いつまでも…

Author: Unare Haineko

Pairing: [Juntoshi] Matsumoto Jun x Ohno Satoshi

Rating: R-ish, but NC-17 for this chapter

Summary: [Revised] Three years after the ending of ‘Kodoku kara Umareta Ai’, we have Juntoshi trying to raise their son Ayumu while the demons from the dark shadows that separated Arashi in KodoAi come back to

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Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[unare_haineko]

It is only a matter of time before Jun no longer allows the parasitic NaSA!Ohno to have any part of him. Detached from the host, the miserable parasite will have to seek out another or risk extinction. Haha!

The Juntoshi relationship is deteriorating right before Jun's eyes, but it is a slow death, marked by hints dropped here and there. The symptoms of a whithering relationship are there, yet due to dramatic irony Jun does not have all the information we are privileged to. His illusion is definitely starting to crack and creak under the stress of Ohno's NaSA tendencies.

You are correct that Jun is tough and that he is slowly bringing back that part of him he locked away while he was on this extended holiday in a world of mirage. He has all the resources within his reach, particularly dear Miyazono who is starting to piece together the relationships for Jun. I think Ohno is on the shinkansen to your circle of hell (having sex in the bathroom with Reiya) as we speak. Have you a special torture prepared for his depraved soul? (Hopefully there will still be something to torture once Jun gets through with him)

Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[mmestrange]

Well, Ohno is like an ivy plant. He stands for good things like friendship and unity and things like that, but all he does is cling and suck the life out of Jun. I look forward to him further descending into the pits of hell. Though by that point, he will be little more than an animal. Interestingly, there's a news article about primitive men once having penile spines (http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-12689692). I kid you not. Of course, the main thing i noticed in this article is that loss of these spines corresponded with the loss of some part of the brain. but for some reason the author of that article just glossed over the brain and stayed on the penis. a few friends had said that the loss of these spikes on the penis must have stemmed from too much hand polishing... Which does explain why so many men nowadays are wankers.

Well. At the rate NaSa!Ohno is hand polishing the spikes off his penis, Jun or Ayu will tell Jun, "Satoshi-papa is walking around naked with his hand on his little friend." Quick, let's turn Ohno into a Min god statue and just put him up in the museum as a cursed object.

I left out something in the main commentary here about Ayu and his daimon which guides him. As I wrote in the notes of the edited version of ch 23, the daimon is divine and guides one to the noble and spirited things. and it is in Ayu, which is why he can see things with the necessary detachment (well, things that don't have anything to do with Kazu the Apatosaurus and the namecard he must have hidden there). The daimon is the very thing Socrates claimed was guiding him in his conversations/teachings with the youths he was alleged to be corrupting.

I also left out that hubby Miyazono is delicious here. Oh, they don't make men like that any more.... Hubby has many pieces of the puzzle. It's what he will do to join them that intrigues me. Oh la la.

Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[unare_haineko]

Pft! Penile spines. Ah, this explains it all. The creator must have found it to be humorous for men to have these things and must have been sorely disappointed when they were deleted from the evolutionary track of human DNA. I think men should be kept in sperm banks for reproduction, harvested for sperm like chickens and their eggs. The good ones can be out and about in society doing things we know they're better at than women, like physical labor, professional cooking, fashion, cosmetics, and interior design.

I wouldn't put it past Ohno to walk around penis in hand around the flat, but spare the boy! He's only 3! Of course, the boy has already seen so much at such a tender age. But do we really want to expose him to Ohno's depravity even if the boy is dimly aware that Ohno has an addiction?

Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[mmestrange]

Men should be kept in tiny little cages like non-free range chickens. It would be an amusing sight. And then we can pick one. XD

Well, you know, I'm all in for corruption. But it could be a little too much for Ayu. Perhaps Jun can witness this instead and we can spare the indignity. Imagine if Ohno-mama finds out... Oh... the possibilities there too.

Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[unare_haineko]

Non-free range chickens. Hah! This is why I <3 you so much. Or even better, we could make them ants and have a little ant farm that we could shake around whenever they start acting up or getting wise with us.

We don't want Ayumu ending up sexually dysfunctional like Ohno because of a childhood trauma like that even if he's not really Ohno's son. Although that would make for an interesting twist. Hmm...maybe I could write something later like an alternate ending. Ayumu sees Ohno and becomes this sexual predator in his teens to the horror of Jun and grandmama! I am evil...

Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Juntoshi Dynamics, part 3

[mmestrange]

I like this ant farm. XD

True, we don't want Ayu ending up a wanker like Ohno. But the horror it would bring Jun and grandmama... there's something appealing in that. heh.