Now and Forever...Itsumademo... - Chapter 21C

[unare_haineko]

Title: Now and Forever…いつまでも…

Author: Unare Haineko

Pairing: [Juntoshi] Matsumoto Jun x Ohno Satoshi

Rating:  R-ish, but NC-17 for this chapter

Summary: [Revised] Three years after the ending of ‘Kodoku kara Umareta Ai’ (which you can read here), we have Juntoshi trying to raise their son Ayumu while the demons from the dark shadows that

Comments

Re: Analyses & Commentary, Chapter 21, Section 1, part 7

[unare_haineko]

Very nice introduction to the Miyazono-Kei scene in your Nozoki+JE connection section. Readers who skim through my chapters should read this first part of the analysis to grasp the full picture of the control dynamics of the scene.

I simply adored the bit on Confucianism and Mohism. Since I overslept this morning, I was only able to read the first half of Section 1 of the commentary before work. But it was so nice to read a reference to the different schools of thought. Had I woken up half an hour earlier I could have had tea and scones with my degeneration of humanity among minor characters in the HC Nozoki subplot. Only you spoil me!! *kiss kiss* Ironically, the NCP is the ultimate foolish animal--he chases the carrot relentlessly (and not even the real thing, half the time it's an illusion of a bushel of carrots) yet he rules his household and his business with the stick. But that is for another day.

And the Rubik's cube makes a second appearance with our MatsuJun lookalike. (You can bet it's not going to be its final appearance) As you neatly pointed out, Kei's method is "blatantly" described in the way he goes about attempting to solve the cube. With a cube that has no top nor bottom, if you didn't solve the first face correctly the first time, it is easy to simply choose another color and solve it to another side. There's simply no benefit to spinning the squares about in a useless attempt to "scramble" everything at the last second. Kei may muddle things a bit more and create some extra work for hubby, but as I like to always say, "the vermin can run, but they can't hide"...

Re: Analyses & Commentary, Chapter 21, Section 1, part 7

[mmestrange]

I seriously doubt people read the commentaries, my love. Very often, they will go "tl;dr" and cast scathing looks this way. *smirk* Anyhow, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed reading the first section and you know I am quite devoted to my Yuuichi. Ah... My hubby is truly a man amongst men...

The Rubik's cube will be returning, I can feel it. And I look forward to it. The Mohism and Confucianism thing was something that struck me as I read this section. You know how NCPs are like, the sperm donor and the male sprogs from that line are the same. Meh.

Well, Kei may muddy things, but hubby will get the better of him. Oh, isn't he such a darling, my Miyazono. *swoons*