Now and Forever...Itsumademo... - Chapter 11B

Jun 03, 2009 06:04


Title: Now and Forever…いつまでも…

Author: Mayonaka no Taiyou/Unare Haineko

Pairing: [Juntoshi] Matsumoto Jun x Ohno Satoshi

Rating:  R-ish.  [I am changing this rating to R due to the direction I am taking with this story.  I probably should have done it earlier, but I think it is time to officially change it since I have decided which direction ( Read more... )

now and forever, juntoshi, arashi, fanfic

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Re: Analysis and Residual questions, part 1 unare_haineko June 4 2009, 16:36:03 UTC
Aiba the man of a thousand contradictions on a single thread of insecurity. For our purposes, let's just say that there were many times and many things that happened in the Sakuraiba past (and will happen in the Sakuraiba future), some of which will be brought up, that should give Aiba more than enough reason to dump Sho and move on with his life, but...! Well, you know how dependent relationships go as they drown each other while madly professing their love for one another... Meh.

(5) the club fellow--not significant. Don't worry about him. Just making a point about Aiba's issues with fidelity.

Tiny. I thought you might get a kick out of his name. 太 is read as 'tai' in Japanese and 兄 is read as 'nii' like in 'niisan'. Tiny is named after this guy I used to work with. His nickname was 'Tiny' but he was a huge Polynesian man. He looked really scary, but he was really nice (and extremely talkative).

Tiny is indeed significant (while not to the extent of someone like Daisuke or Kei) and despite Fa-nine's efforts to keep certain aspects (such as the client's true identities) confidential, Tiny will of course inevitably let something slip...nothing new.

Jersey! Yes...Jersey is also significant towards the main plot. Just between the two of us, Jersey is a nickname (like Ki-Sa-Ma) that Fa-nine has given to this particular client. And as you can see, for good reason, lest Tiny spill the real identities of this particular client (who is actually--*gasp* someone M. Aiba is familiar with! You can probably figure his identity out...). But...you didn't hear me say that... *walks away whistling*

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Re: Analysis and Residual questions, part 1 mmestrange June 4 2009, 16:49:33 UTC
Ah...Aiba and his insecurities... Maybe I should take him out for something to eat in our next therapy session. You know, Sho and Aiba have a codependent relationship, a dangerous thing to have especially since one side is obviously needier than the other.

The pun over "Tiny" is wonderful. It was one of the highlights of this chapter, other than Jun's self-blame (which is my favourite of his reflection series so far). I do expect the garrulous Tiny to say something. You've practically set things up for that, as indicated above.

Ah ha! I knew Jersey was important! Vindication! *bwahaha* Must figure out all about Jersey

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