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The First Five Times - Part 1

Sep 15, 2009 18:36

Title: The First Five Times - Part 1
Fandom: Bones
Pairing: Brennan/Booth
Rating: M/NC-17
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine. They belong to Kathy Reichs and Hart Hanson, et al.
Summary/Notes: Based on the Stars' song "The First Five Times" although I did take a few liberties from the lyrics. I started writing this story ages ago, so I imagined it ( Read more... )

tv: bones, fan fiction: the first five times, fan fiction

Comments 4

bearlee_there September 16 2009, 14:52:44 UTC

Bravo! Well done. Well-written smut with a believable backstory is a treasure.

Words I liked:

Brennan had all the reasons why he should stop on the tip of her tongue, but when he kissed her again, the only thing she wanted on her tongue was his.

technique and tenderness lost to passion and whiskey

Off to read the next part. Thanks for posting. :)

fromahippie September 16 2009, 21:02:19 UTC

That was really good. Very well-writen.

alias_jems October 15 2009, 23:29:47 UTC

I love this idea - the image if Booth sat alone and rinking in an empty tent which should have also housed his son is too sad. :( Lovely.

I love that our show has shown us B+B+whisky - it is fanfic writers dream :D :D

kateinslacks October 30 2009, 02:57:52 UTC

I just found this story and I was intrigued because of the reference to the Stars song (and I figure if you know Stars, you must be pretty cool) and I was definitely not disappointed. This was great - sexy and credible. I could completely see this happening. Nice work! Now I'm on to the next part...