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un_den_iable

5 Times Pam Isn't Pregnant

Aug 06, 2009 00:29

Title: 5 Times Pam Isn't Pregnant
Pairing: Pam/Roy, Jim/Pam
Summary: Pretty much what the title says. Spoilers for “Phyllis’s Wedding” through “Negotiation” and “Company Picnic.” Author's notes at the end.

( She sees only one line. Negative. She’s not pregnant. )

tv: the office, fan fiction

Comments 6

websofseaweed August 6 2009, 05:21:28 UTC

This is so sweet! I like how you put each of the situations at very different times in her life so each segment is different. All of her reactions are very in character. I can totally imagine Jim saying he'd do anything for his two girls - so sweet! :)

Awesome job.

P.S. I love your Naomi/Emily icon :-)

un_den_iable August 7 2009, 05:25:14 UTC

Thanks for the nice review!

heloula August 6 2009, 11:47:18 UTC

I loved it. Twas too sweet and well written. God I can't wait for the return of the show. Is it Spetember yet?

Good job!

dragonflyxeyes August 6 2009, 15:24:20 UTC

Squee. That was so good. That made me super duper excited for September. :) Thanks for that.

cork118 August 6 2009, 17:53:21 UTC

Aww, yay! I'm so excited for September!!

This was so good. I loved the second one the best. Poor Pam. :(

fauxpasweremade August 6 2009, 18:12:43 UTC

This was absolutely delightful to read :) I really enjoyed the twist with the doctor calling back to confirm she isn't pregnant after all! You should consider posting this at my JAM fanfic and writing circle community alovesosexy! We're always looking for new writers and new stories! The point of the community is that it functions as an archive and as a writing circle where writers and readers alike give thorough feedback on the stories that are posted, offering constructive criticism when needed. Basically it's a place where fics are given in depth reviews instead of one liners that simply say, "This was great!"