fic: There is a time and place for this sort of thing. 3/3

[umeko_star]

Title: There is a time and place for this sort of thing. Part 3.
Author: umeko_star
Rating: NC-17 (for smutty sexiness)
Word Count: 6,042
Disclaimer:  to love something, you have to set it free. Therefore, I can't own NBC/Community
Summary: Jeff and Annie journey through self discovery, and what they mean to themselves before they evaluate what they

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[teruel_a_witch]

!!!!!! The sound that came out of my mouth when I saw this had been posted was not human, I've been following this story since the first chapter was posted and couldn't wait for the resolution, I'm hardcore in love with this fic, it's just what I'd wanted after the UN episode and more (I'd even left a prompt back then for a fic which would explore a situation where Jeff and Annie try to "keep respectable distance" but fail because they miss each other terribly but this is so much better and deeper and enhanced than I could have imagined) Just, basically, gah

[teruel_a_witch]

Just a tiny little thing that I noticed (posting as a separate comment so that you could delete it when the problem is fixed ;)) Jeff has magical appearing/disappearing jeans ;)

He raised himself up slightly and ripped off his shirt and pushed down his jeans and briefs. She reached for him, wanting to touch but his own hands met her fingers halfway and closed around them.

“Jeff, please.”
He raised her fingers up to his lips and kissed them one by one; letting his tongue wet them gently. Impatient, she lifted her hips off the cool surface of the table and pressed her heat against the crotch of his jeans and smiled splendidly as she felt the telling hardening even through the tough denim.
“Jeff…”

I figure the sentences are out of order. I hope you don't think I'm picking on you or anything, I thought it's a kind thing to do to let you know about this little mishap so that the fic would truly be perfect.

[umeko_star]

ALSKJASLKFJDFSLFJD
OMG THANKS. agh, this is what happens when i write on the laptop. and then continue writing in a notebook on the bus or something. YAH. THE SEX SCENES WERE WRITTEN ON A BUS WITH OLD LADIES AND LITTLE SCHOOL GIRLS SITTING AROUND ME. but yes, thank you. it's fixed now.

and you, you just made a personal dream of mine come true. you gave me GIF replies. I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING THAT ELICITED GIFS IN THE RESPONSES.

i will write a more grateful response to yours soon. i'm in class. haha bad

[teruel_a_witch]

Haha, there's nothing wrong with that;) I always read smut in public places on my phone, I've been doing it during boring lectures and seminars for years,too. The only awkward moment was when my Mum asked what I was reading and she wasn't just satisfied with a vague reply "fanfic" she wanted to know what it was about, to which I non-committally answered "Oh, well, you know, some boring romance-y stuff, you have to know characters to understand what it's about"(it was actually a PWP XD)

Glad I could help, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes, 'cause it's hard to proofread yourself. Me and my friend had a system where she'd discreetly read my exam paper to look for mistakes and I'd read hers, always helped with grammar and translation XD

Hee, I'm glad I could give some of the pleasure you brought me with this fic back <3

Btw, I'm a little confused so I wanted to ask, when was this?
the vision of her sitting atop the counters so many months ago as he prepared them dinner, or her leaning against him as he poured them their

[umeko_star]

i was alluding to the times before they stopped spending time together. before when everything was still innocent and they never realized the "creep" factor behind their interactions. so yes, it's a bit of an AU touch. they had been good friends and incredibly close at some point but someone always has to point out their age and all of a sudden this chasm of judgement and societal ne'er do wells gaped open between them and wrenched them apart...temporarily.

[teruel_a_witch]

Oh, so it was normal for them to spent their mornings together or even have innocent *sleepovers*? (I'm assuming they hadn't had sex before this chapter)

someone always has to point out their age and all of a sudden this chasm of judgement and societal ne'er do wells gaped open between them and wrenched them apart
Grr, nothing good ever comes from society.

Btw, are we gonna see an update to your other fic any time soon or it'd be on-hold until the paper time is over?

[umeko_star]

during part 1, the very first scene was of them deciding they needed to spend some time apart; for them to decide who they are without each other. so yes, they have been seeing each other outside of the group/school and in my mind they were scared they were getting too close. like all of a sudden they wound up kissing on her sofa when all they were doing were studying or something. this was all very post 3.02. Annie needed to grow up a bit, and Jeff needed to realize he can be a good person.

the other fic should be coming soon. but most likely on hold till i finish off this semester...well, i say that to make myself feel like a good student when realistically i will be using fic writing as a mean to avoid my papers. haha.

thanks for your input and lovely comments. =) they make my day shine.

[umeko_star]

i kind of choked up when i wrote the love-making part. i just imagined their sex to be so unbelievably HOT but not like a porno way, but just desperately engaging. that feeling you get when you've consumed too much and you just want it to stop, when you feel you can't possibly take anymore and you're willing to let everything go.

thank you so much for this awesome reply. <3

[teruel_a_witch]

i kind of choked up when i wrote the love-making part.
As did I while reading, it's just *gasp*

i just imagined their sex to be so unbelievably HOT but not like a porno way
YES, it's just how they are, with their ~INSANE CHEMISTRY~ and their ~FEELINGS~, desperate and intense and BEAUTIFUL (I imagine later on they'd be having a lot of fun and giggles but the first time with all the ~emotion~ bursting is gotta be like this) So very beautiful *sigh*

<3