[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 5)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or leaping from one rock to another without

Comments

[ansuka]

wow.....
this as really confusing.......

So, this seems like they were together in the orphanate but..... maybe something happened there... and Changmin cleaning his mouth after the kiss.....
maybe someone saw them and tell Changmin that that is really wrong... or something.....

and JJ using the fire to scare him.... wow.... I don't know why but it doesn't seem like the first time for me.... They seem to be tired of the other..... and did JJ accuse Changmin like that.... maybe he blame him for what happened in this all time.... they seem to not have money, but JJ was rich when he was a kid. or maybe because he doesn't have parents now....
And that cold and tiring and.... monoton..ash *don't remember the word in english T_T* freak me out.

As JAejoong said.... where did hIS Changmin went?.... what happened because the two of them are soooo changed.... and Jaejoong got another boyfriend... what happened with aaaall the love that Changmin used to felt for him ><

and that person that send the msg to CM mmmm.... IDK

When Jaejoong said that he was going out for coke I read cock xDDDDDDd I was like..... 'ow no poor JJ he need to satisfy his needs in other places LOL'

and his tatoo ooooooow... MMMMMMMmmmmm I thing the foxes are coming back soon....

[umeboshi_heart]

OMG I lol so much at your misread coke into cock and your pity for jaexDDDDDD

yeah, yeah.... something is happened... and they're just frustrated about it. wow so much at your speculations *hug you* hihihihi i hope I can update soon so everything's become clear, thank u so much for the awesome comment! XD

[ansuka]

naaa girl
thank you

I'm loving this so much ♥
I love angsty because it hurt and it makes me think and makes me want to kill the author.. yeah... you :DDD
But I like what you've write so far... so I'm here ^^

AND IS JAEMIN
how can I not read this?
;w;