Comments | umadoshi: [FIC] "History, Like Love" [5/6]

umadoshi

[FIC] "History, Like Love" [5/6]

Apr 26, 2007 19:06

Previous chapters can be found here (ch. one), here (ch. two), here (ch. three), and here (ch. four). The last chapter is scheduled for April 30.

Two uploaded songs: Vienna Teng's "Feather Moon" and Tori Amos' "Little Earthquakes". (Change 'xx' to 'tt'.)

( In her dreams, her human and animal shapes are fluid and interchangeable--she has hands to lift things, and hooves to carry her when she wants the wind on her face. Dreaming, she knows herself to be a vessel of flesh for something immense and glorious, and never wonders at the strangeness of the Horse's spirit being bound up within the heart of a frail human girl. )

fanfic post, fic: "history like love" (fb haru/rin)

Comments 4

toriru4ever April 27 2007, 01:52:00 UTC

I'm gonna have to sit and read all the previous chapters this weekend! *_*
gah I missed furuba ficcie so bad! Yesterday I burst out in tears when I came across the mp3 of furuba opening song and i was like omg I haven't heard that them in forever (since 2004)
*sigh*

umadoshi April 27 2007, 21:48:52 UTC

*laughs* It's kinda long (but at least the last part'll be out on Monday ^^).

I miss Furuba fic too. :/ I don't really venture far afield for it, and not many people I know are writing it anymore.

coastal_spirit May 4 2007, 22:17:32 UTC

I like the way you wrote of Rin's fragmented memories coming back to her. Also, the physical and psychological are always so well-melded in your sex scenes. I can almost feel their yearning, as well as their caution and Haru's reluctance. I feel like Rin is back, and I'm liking the way this is going. On to the last chapter!

umadoshi May 5 2007, 03:44:00 UTC

^^ I've discovered that I quite like writing sex scenes that don't fit the stereotypical patterns--no "actual" sex, as in this one, or my favorite part (of the actual sex scenes) in the lemonesque, which involved poorly-timed sleep. It leaves so much more room for exploring the emotional dynamics.

Having Rin back made me very happy when I was writing, and in retrospect I find it a little weird that the *first* scene I wrote of the entire fic was the only one from her (real-time) POV. While editing, Alishya mentioned that the story really is about Rin, not Haru, but I think that adds to the sense of disconnection, since she has basically no voice at all for most of it.