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"Playing Games"
an X/1999 fic by Ysabet MacFarlane (
umadoshi)
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Alternate title: "fic written in intermittent chunks over the last week, which might not see the light of day (yet) under ordinary circumstances since it's not how I usually write things"
Written for
hinikuish's birthday, after spending about two years promising her that I'll
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Arashi seems to be growing a sense of humor, doesn't she? She's right dry, and I love how Sorata immediately turns to Karen for a reaction. Because she would be the one to turn to. XD I love the detail of Kamui finding out Subaru was coming over and then spending the whole day nervous, he's so like that. XD And how you touched on the other not-sword aspect of Arashi's powers, and the fact that she takes cold showers, because I bet she is weird enough to like that. XDD AND AND--!!
Hee. Arashi's just so... what's the word... sane in this story. XD I'd forgotten that she could be. She's quite dry and cheerful in a dot-dot-dot sort of way, and Sorata's just... well, he isn't teasing her, which would be why. But he's so mature and cute in it. XD You write him so much more sane than I can. *dies sparkling* but really I'm just unable to review this properly, because I'm dead from win. *pimps out story to world*
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..."forgotten that Arashi could be sane." Oh my. ^^
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(Of course, your Sorata is what I'm used to reading now, so I spent half the fic being anxious over him not being, um, madly hyper. ^^)
And I always like the way you write Arashi (not just that whole "sane" trait, although there is that), so we're balanced out. XD My Sorata can be serious, he just... actively chooses not to be. It's just more fun that way.
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