Debt

[ultraviolet9a]

>>Debt

TITLE: Debt
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[misskatieleigh]

*whimpers*

[ultraviolet9a]

Uhm...sorry? Honestly. But. Uhm. You know the plot donkeys. They're like Dean, they just have to have their way. Uhm.

Thank you for reading!

[iamstealthyone]

*whimpers*

So much angst here, with Sam unraveling and Dean finally putting him back together by letting him go.

Oh, boys

Very nicely done.

Favorite lines:

All he remembers is that he wants to get back. All he knows is that he’s not supposed to be here.

Oh, Sam.

Three women wearing the night. The one is holding a pair of iron scissors in one hand, a cut golden thread in the other. The second is clasping her arms to her chest. The third is turning a golden spindle, except that the thread she’s spinning now is invisible.

I love this imagery.

He wants to tell him that he had gotten it right in the first place.

What’s dead should stay dead. No exceptions.

Let God figure out the rest.

*hugs Sam*

“Why’dyoudoitDean,” he mumbles. “IloveyouDeanwhy’dyoudoit.”

You know you’re breaking my heart, right?

He’s dead.

((Darkness.))

((Home.))

*whimpers*

[ultraviolet9a]

*scotchtaping your heart back*

It's just...well...Resurrection is a bitch is too interesting a theme to bypass.

Thank you for reading, hon!

[katriel1987]

[ultraviolet9a]

Thank you so much! It's good to know that all of his screwed up falling apart got through, because it was tough to write.

(What's OCD?)

[katriel1987]

[ultraviolet9a]

Ah. Thank you.

[luvsabitch]

oh honey I'm in bits, that's the second story I've read that has made me cry real tears. That is so sad and beautiful, the imagery is fantastic. Poor boys!

i struggle with the britishisms when I write, but I don't notice them when I'm reading Lol!

[ultraviolet9a]

Ah, sorry about the bits and tears piece. *winces* It wasn't any easier to write, if that's any comfort.

Thank you for reading!

[saberivojo]

This is not going to happen. I refuse to let it happen.

*puts hands over ears*

la,la,la,la,la,la.

Ok, I can cover my ears but not my eyes. This is so hard to read and the possiblity is so real that it hurts.

Lets hope it does not go down this way.

Thanks. I think!! :)

[ultraviolet9a]

This is TOTALLY not going to happen. It's a fic. Just a fic. NOT GOING TO HAPPEN. I promise.

Though...it COULD happen. *cough* In a darker verse. :)

Don't thank me. I'm the one that's supposed to do that for you reading. :)