Poem
This is a poem I wrote last year in english and enterted it in a contest...what do you think?
White Coma
By: Brittany O’Bryan
I’m walking.
Walking until I cannot walk anymore.
Where am I going?
Anywhere but here.
I stop.
Take a look around me.
I can’t see anything.
Everything is white.
Trying to focus.
All I see is white darkness.
Still walking.
Numbness consumes me.
I look ahead of myself.
And I see you.
Walking towards me.
Faster and faster my heart races.
Closer and closer you come.
Faster.
Closer.
I’m reaching out to feel your touch.
Here you are.
Gazing into my eyes.
The silence is deafening.
I take a step forward, still reaching, wanting to feel you
Then it all turns white, and your gone from my life, forever.
White Coma
By: Brittany O’Bryan
I’m walking.
Walking until I cannot walk anymore.
Where am I going?
Anywhere but here.
I stop.
Take a look around me.
I can’t see anything.
Everything is white.
Trying to focus.
All I see is white darkness.
Still walking.
Numbness consumes me.
I look ahead of myself.
And I see you.
Walking towards me.
Faster and faster my heart races.
Closer and closer you come.
Faster.
Closer.
I’m reaching out to feel your touch.
Here you are.
Gazing into my eyes.
The silence is deafening.
I take a step forward, still reaching, wanting to feel you
Then it all turns white, and your gone from my life, forever.