you already know how much i love the beginning paragraphs, they're so gorgeous and the whole painting/sunset description melts my heart since i have a weak spot for romantic, poetic like analogies and stuff.
"But I lean closer until I can count her flimsy eyelashes, and if she were real I’d be close enough to hear her heart beating, or see myself reflected on her charcoal eyes too; but she’s dead, dead, dead - and I kiss her anyway."
okay, i'm insanely in love with the whole 'if-i-touch-her-i'm-in-pain' ordeal, it's just that little edge that makes you so anxious on how they'll end up. plus, the 'It hurts everywhere - of course it hurts, it’s an abomination to touch her, it’s death.' nearly killed me. it sounded very much like myungsoo(?).
characterization is spot-on (in my head at least, because this is E X A C T L Y how i picture my myungsoo and suzy)!!! we are really and truly otp soul mates. especially this line: "(When did I start to care?)"
that line nearly killed me, it's probably my most favorite line? (despite the amazing description you've put into this)
ugh, i don't even know which myungzy fic of yours is my favorite anymore, this pretty much topped everything. i'm a sucker for pretty details, what can i do.
but i agree with yoldine, i am so glad you didn't make this nc-17. so glad that you didn't make him have sex with BONE DUST, JESUS CHRIST.
(not much of a meta, but here are my coherent feelings for now, and i'm adding this to my favorite fanfic list!)
you already know how much i love the beginning paragraphs, they're so gorgeous and the whole painting/sunset description melts my heart since i have a weak spot for romantic, poetic like analogies and stuff.
"But I lean closer until I can count her flimsy eyelashes, and if she were real I’d be close enough to hear her heart beating, or see myself reflected on her charcoal eyes too; but she’s dead, dead, dead - and I kiss her anyway."
okay, i'm insanely in love with the whole 'if-i-touch-her-i'm-in-pain' ordeal, it's just that little edge that makes you so anxious on how they'll end up. plus, the 'It hurts everywhere - of course it hurts, it’s an abomination to touch her, it’s death.' nearly killed me. it sounded very much like myungsoo(?).
characterization is spot-on (in my head at least, because this is E X A C T L Y how i picture my myungsoo and suzy)!!! we are really and truly otp soul mates. especially this line: "(When did I start to care?)"
that line nearly killed me, it's probably my most favorite line? (despite the amazing description you've put into this)
ugh, i don't even know which myungzy fic of yours is my favorite anymore, this pretty much topped everything. i'm a sucker for pretty details, what can i do.
but i agree with yoldine, i am so glad you didn't make this nc-17. so glad that you didn't make him have sex with BONE DUST, JESUS CHRIST.
(not much of a meta, but here are my coherent feelings for now, and i'm adding this to my favorite fanfic list!)
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