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Mar 09, 2013 15:12


and then it begins

yunho/jaejoong; r; character death;

we both stay silent, forever. )

rating: r, warnings: character deaths, length: oneshot, title: and then it begins

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takelo14 March 16 2013, 18:19:19 UTC
Lol saaammmmeee! Poetry is so beautiful but I feel like such a wannabe when I try to write it xD
But I think you did a fine job! And I like how there's a bit of ambiguity , so I feel like it left some parts up to the readers to interpret :D
A book rec huh? Actually I need it! I haven't ready anything decent in a long while.
I would recommend 'The Great Gatsby', though it's a classic so you might've already read it. His writing style is AMAZING! his use of imagery will take your breath away ;)

HAHA WHYYYYYY?! I thought it was a fantastic story!!! YOU MUST SHARE THE LOVE! You're depriving people of an awesome fic!!! <3 I'm glad my comment made you happy :) YES! Your oldest fic is still appreciated! (=´∀`)人(´∀`=)
Lol but I understand you completely! lookin back at my old writings, I think:
"WOW THIS IS A PIECE OF SHIT" lol, but you shouldn't cause it was a good story, an well written
Think of it this way! you've improved greatly; so greatly that your old writings boggle you ;DDD

I dont plan my stories either xD but to me it seems to vein the story to life, because you're not restraining it. Anything goes, you know? It makes it more exciting to write as well.
Though... There's a disturbing pattern I'm my stories where jaejoong gets hurt...lol
I have to start writing again! I haven't written anything in almost a year...

Yes *____* HAHA we could always bag them after a concert or something!!!

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chunfacebiased March 28 2013, 20:40:33 UTC
UGH, HELLO. i'm really so sorry for such a late reply TT TT i'm all over the place right now trying to apologize and continue my conversations with friends on lj and whatnot <(。_。)>

omg you should also read Ham on Rye by Charles Bukowski and A Personal Matter by Kenzaburō Ōe, however these aren't poetry but just regular novels. BUT THEY'RE FUCKING AMAZING, OH MY GOD! and yesyesyesyesyes that book is on my "must-read" list ;___;

And oh my gosh, sweetie, you're really killing me here with your kind words ヽ(●゚´Д`゚●)ノ゚ come give me a huuuuuuug ♥ ♥ i will definitely open it up again and link it on my archive (wow OTL it was actually not private locked so people could've read it without me knowing, omg. ) once i clean it up a bit :33 & AHAHAH, YEEEEEEEES. AGREED!!!! i'm trying to minimize my embarrassment for unplanned fics by actually doing some sort of planning especially because this way things will sound realistic and whatnot.

and wow, you totally should! i had no idea you wrote fanfics :DDD i haven't actually had time to read a lot of yunjae fics but i'm going to scope around some for during the summer break :3~~~~ & yessss, i have that pattern to. most of my fics are like that ;____; idky but .. yeah, it's kind of just my fancy, i guess. which is terrible but whatever. can't help how i feel TT TT

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