OOC: muse critique

Dec 16, 2012 12:27


Since I always post at the muse critiques anyways, I might as well just have one at Uchi's LJ. Be as honest as you need.

✌ characterization
    (any random facts about Uchi that you want to throw my way, go ahead. i would love it!)
    (i know he talks about his dogs a lot, and it might seem like a lot to people but this boy really LOVES his dogs)
    (JE relationships - Outside of Kanjani8 + Kame + Koichi, I'm a bit shaky on Uchi's relationships. Please bear with me or give me some helpful pointers!)

✌ writing style
    (there's probably only a handful of people Uchi have scened with so any feedback would be great!)
    (and i know i jump around with my tenses a bit.. T_T;; i don't really know how to change that..)

✌ anything else you want

✌ here's 10 random facts about my Uchi while you're here!
   1. he drinks occasionally but not a lot. you won't find him running around getting wasted.
    2. shopping for dog clothes IS a hobby of his
    3. he tries not to stay too focused on the past though its a bit hard for him still
    4. during his suspension was when Uchi figured out that there's nothing else he wanted to be
    5. he doesn't complain as much as he used to
    6. the real loves the song "Lucky" and my Uchi loves the song because he finds it relatable to his situation. 
    7. there were rumors that he has a belly ring but I haven't seen pics of it so mine doesn't have one
    8. he loves Hawaii because the obvious reasons and even though it's a foreign country, there's still enough Japanese speaking people that he'll still be in his comfort zone. 
    9. most people only see the nice friendly side of Uchi but he can be quite sarcastic sometimes. 
    10. the real's actual favorite disney movie is "The Little Mermaid" but i think my muse said his favorite disney movie is "Peter Pan." opps.

AND.. sorry to people who have reached out to Uchi through AIM. Honestly I'm more comfortable commenting through LJ so aim conversations with me usually die fast or is very awkward most of the time. I usually just do scenes on AIM. Sorry about that! 

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