Embers | PG | Sense and Sensibility

[ubiquitousmixie]

Title: Embers

Prompt: Directly after the scene where Edward arrives to visit Elinor, and Lucy is there. Let us say Lucy and Marianne have left, leaving Edward and Elinor to speak.

Fandom: Elinor/Edward, Sense and Sensibility (movie version)

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Comments

[ellipsisoveruse]

Ooh, this is gorgeous! You've managed to convey so much in so few words. I love your word choices - you've managed to really *grip* me with this drabble

[kitnkabootle]

I have to say that I agree with a lot of ellipsisoveruse above. She singled out many of my favorite parts. I really really liked how everything was worded and specifically period. Being that I write for a Regency era all the time and research the yeses and no's that occur for society graces, dialogue, dress - you actually succeeded and got a VERY big tick in each box.

I am really impressed by your ability to write for this era, and I really hope you'll write for it again. What say you huh? :) Thanks so much for this beautiful piece of fiction and thank you for being Virginia Woolf incarnate :)

[hot_4_hahn]

This is gorgeous. You captured Elinor's turmoil so well. Her heart longs for Edward, but she's now convinced herself that he freely gives his heart to another. The reader's knowledge that this couldn't be further from the truth, just makes her heartache all the more palpable.

The short piece was absolutely delicious and lovely. Thank you.