Since You Went Away - Chapter Seventeen: The Women

[ubiquitousmixie]

Title: Since You Went Away - Chapter Seventeen: The Women
Authors: i-must-go-first & UbiquitousMixie
Fandom: Brenda/Sharon, The CloserRating: PG-13 (Overall M

Comments

[surena_13]

Oh poor Sharon. I love Willie Ray, but I wouldn't want to go on a shopping spree with her even if you paid me.

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! I love how they're both painfully aware of the fact that they're attracted to each other and yet are too stubborn to truly act on it.

Willie Ray and the whole shopping trip was both fun and agonizing. Sharon's almost petulant behaviour combined with the hideous dress she had to try on was an enjoyable visual. Brenda and Sharon sharing a dressing room was hot albeit a bit awkward. Subtle staring really isn't their forte, is it?

The bit about Sharon's daughter made my heart clench. Whenever that gets mentioned, it just hurt. You really know how to write that pain and write Sharon trying to deal with it.

This chapter was great and lovely. I can't wait for the next.

(and I know that the Brenda/Sharon shippers have been a bit absent lately, but trust, all of them are reading this story)

[kiranerys101]

Oh my... you can cut the sexual tension with a knife! The long wait for an update was definitely worth it.

Loved the beginning of Sharon taking a step back, even if it wasn't articulated as such. She's so much in her own head and so scared.

Any mention of Sharon's daughter makes me catch my breath. So much pain there.

And Willie Rae playing the unintentional matchmaker, hilarious. Sure, shove them naked in the dressing room ;)

Looking very much forward to more of this well-written story that gets the characters just right, whenever that may be.

[defyingnormalcy]

Oh goodness, I think you've slaughtered me with all the UST in this chapter! A wonderful update, thanks for sharing! :)

[sharon_ray]

I JUST LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH. YOU TWO.

You two are such beautiful authors. The details in this story are just stunning. You chronicle the intricacies and complications of two women falling in love so well. It is just lovely. Thank you for continuing to write through your crazy busy schedules!!

[g_ww]

Cockblocked by Willie Rae... *sigh*.

Seriously, there's no way these two aren't having The Really Hot Sex sometime soon, right? Sooner or later Sharon's just going to run out of excuses - or possibly willpower.

Great update. Your style is lovely and your characterisation continues to be delightful.