Since You Went Away - Chapter Thirteen: Pillow Talk

[ubiquitousmixie]

Title: Since You Went Away - Chapter Thirteen: Pillow Talk
Authors: i-must-go-first & UbiquitousMixie
Fandom: Brenda/Sharon, The CloserRating: PG-13 (Overall M

Comments

[obsessive_a101]

Beautiful. This chapter was a wonder-inducing mix of heartrending that is instigated by tragedy shared between people and the adorable and everyday nature of a developing relationship and just... Life.

*hugs*

[1000ships]

This really made MY week. I love everything about this story - Cee, the kitties, the ladies' friendship and it's achingly torturously slow progression into something more, the other supporting characters, all of it. In this chapter, in particular, Sharon breaking down over the pizza toppings was sad and gorgeous. I feel like you've been leading us into this - they've had a bunch of 'moments' regarding Sharon's daughter where Sharon clamps down on her emotions. I think her breakdown was as cathartic for me as it was for her. And A KISS, finally! I can't wait to see what the fall out is.

[wedowhat]

A beautiful chapter - you deal with some really heavy themes with such a light touch. Even though the content is darker, this is one of my favourite chapters so far. The slow burn of their relationship is great. Thanks!

[averita]

Amazing chapter. I really loved the relationship between Sharon and Paul, and thought the family dynamics were portrayed beautifully. The pacing of this story and of the Brenda/Sharon friendship/something more is exquisite. I'm always so excited to see updates!

[kdtb]

oh so wonderful!! i love how sweet and perfect you made their kiss, totally fit the context and their characters... definitely made me tear up... love you this and your writing!