Yours & Mine | NC17 | The Closer

[ubiquitousmixie]

Title: Yours & Mine
Prompt: Brenda doesn’t do well with the fact that Sharon is the new Brenda.
Fandom: Brenda/Sharon, The Closer
Requested by: imustgofirstRating: NC17

Comments

[1000ships]

I've been dying for some good smut, and I was actually, just tonight, talking to someone about how punishment, for one Ms. Brenda Leigh Johnson, would entail not being allowed to touch Sharon while Sharon pleasures herself, because lord knows the woman does not like to be denied. So you're two for two, and that's completely discounting the fact that Sharon is all bossy and toppy and in control and she was waiting for 10 minutes naked and Brenda was sulking! Oh Brenda. I wonder how long she'll be able to abide by her promises, and what sort of reminders Sharon will come up with when she falters.

Huzzahs to i-must-go-first for conquering her conference. Did she present a paper?

[surena_13]

This was absolutely great! The mere thought of Sharon touching herself does things to me and then you write it out so perfectly and so hot and in Brenda's lap. Just *fans self*

I really loved your take on the established relationship and how Brenda was dealing with not being head of Major Crimes anymore. It makes perfect sense that she would bud in on cases and try to take over. And then sulk about when Sharon doesn't like it.

The way Sharon dealt with that was creative, sexy and just unbelievably hot.

I really like they way you've written them here. They obviously love each other, but there is still a slight animosity between them that just makes the sparks fly.

And you've found the perfect balance, imo, between Diet Raydor and Darth Raydor, unlike Major Crimes has. I recognized both the Sharon from season 5 & 6 and the Sharon we're dealing with now, so fantastic job.

Also, yay for i-must-go-first! I hope she continues to kick ass. And I'm sure that with incentives like the ones you're giving her, she absolutely will.