Another Life | PG13 | Doctor Who

[ubiquitousmixie]

Title: Another Life
Prompt: “You can’t sit on a park bench and wait for life to happen. Sometimes you have to be the one to chase it.”
Challenge: A to Z Drabble Meme Part II; C is for Close
Fandom: Donna Noble/River Song, Doctor WhoRequested by: lakkela

Comments

[surena_13]

Aw, this was really sweet and rather sad too. The way she knows that the word 'forever' is painful to her but she can't remember why, just breaks my heart.

I think you captured both their characters prefectly, but Donna especially. I could just hear her voice as I was reading this.

It was really a beautiful story and it's definitely a pairing I would love to see you write more, if you feel up for that.

Great job!

[dr_helenmagnus]

Ugh this is really lovey! Not knowing why forever breaks her heart, only that it hurts to say it.
I always wanted more interaction between these two and it is perfect.