Comments | ubiquitousmuse: Letting Go | PG

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Letting Go | PG | Private Practice

Oct 25, 2009 20:28

Title: Letting Go
Prompt: A secret
Fandom: Addison, Private Practice
Requested by: lakelaRating: PG ( Read more... )

fandom: private practice, fic: letting go, fan fiction, rating: pg

Comments 7

snoopythepooh October 26 2009, 01:06:32 UTC

Oh, this is lovely. And so fitting that Callie would be the one to call at that crucial moment. *lol* I definitely see Addison being more than a little neurotic about having another huge piece of her perfect, blueblood WASPiness knocked down - especially that piece.

Love this line: "She looks around. The room hasn't burst into flames, pigs aren't flying, and she's still alive."

I know how she feels, though. The moment that you realize that, no, other straight women don't find other women as attractive as you do - and certainly not so many - is an interesting one indeed.

ubiquitousmixie October 28 2009, 04:10:43 UTC

i'm so glad you liked it, hun!

i definitely remember having had that feeling when i realized that what i felt was more than just a "straight girl with a very fond appreciation" of other women.

thanks for commenting!

kris_me October 26 2009, 15:16:35 UTC

You've done it again....I really like this drabble and can relate to it. I love how you end them! Oh, and you know what I love more???????? The fact that you managed to include the word 'perv' in there! ;)

ubiquitousmixie October 28 2009, 04:11:28 UTC

glad your little perv sensors went off ;) i thought of you when i wrote that part!

thanks so much for commenting! i'm glad you liked it!

lizadizzle October 26 2009, 20:30:49 UTC

I haven't been on LJ in weeks and I come back just to peek around for a bit and here this is. xD lmao girl, in the five spare minutes I had today for "nothingness" you made me lol more than once, especially at flailing!addison and the fact that it was technically Callie who did it xD epic!win.

ubiquitousmixie October 28 2009, 04:12:33 UTC

yay! i'm so glad that you chose to stop by this little fic during your LJ de-lurking!

so glad you liked it :) thanks for commenting!

lakela November 3 2009, 21:57:37 UTC

How could I have possibly missed this!! (I hate not being on LJ as much as I used to be... real life sucks =()

Anyhoo... I LOOOOVED this!!! So many great lines stand out. From returning Aliens to Bluckbuster to the flying pigs. I loved Callie's little cameo, such great timing! (and so hilariously in character)
And of course, no one writes Addie like you. That was wonderful!
On a superficial note, I also secretly appreciate the age different of Addie's crush. *g*

And I loved loved the end... in a sad/hopeful kind of way.

Thank you so much for this and I'm sorry I didn't comment sooner. You're amazing!!!!