Comments | ubiquitousmuse: Vote of Confidence | PG

ubiquitousmixie in ubiquitousmuse

Vote of Confidence | PG | Doubt

Jun 21, 2009 19:03

Title: Vote of Confidence

Prompt: confession, classrooms, joy

Fandom: Doubt

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fic: vote of confidence, fandom: doubt, fan fiction, rating: pg

Comments 16

jintymac June 21 2009, 23:33:25 UTC

This was wonderful, you captured their characters perfectly :D

Would you be interested in writing more Doubt fic...?

ubiquitousmixie June 21 2009, 23:38:03 UTC

*sigh of relief* i'm so glad that i managed to pull it off!

thank you for reading and for commenting!

i AM interested in writing more Doubt fic. it's wonderfully addicting.

ellipsisoveruse June 21 2009, 23:38:15 UTC

I really enjoyed this drabble. I think your dialogue is spot-on for the characters, and you managed to capture Sister James' insecurity so well. I really loved the way Aloysius was aware of Sister James and thought enough to bring her dinner - like she *knew* how it'd be.

ubiquitousmixie June 22 2009, 01:06:39 UTC

thank you so much for reading and for commenting. i'm glad you enjoyed it. i was really worried about getting the characters right, so i'm glad that i could pull it off.

perks123 June 22 2009, 00:01:02 UTC

Very, very well done.

ubiquitousmixie June 22 2009, 01:07:05 UTC

thank you so much for reading and commenting :) i'm glad you liked it!

chainofclovers June 22 2009, 00:31:27 UTC

Oh, I love it! Thank you so, so much. I've been having a kind of crappy day, and this cheered me up.

I think you painted Sister Aloysius with a really great blend of kindness and snippiness, and Sister James was earnest without losing all semblance of a personality. Thanks again! I'm thrilled that you wrote for one of my prompts already, and I'm looking forward to finding out what you do with the others.

ubiquitousmixie June 22 2009, 01:08:22 UTC

yay for helping to cheer up crappy days! to be honest, i'd been having a crappy day as well, and writing this helped improve my mood immensely. :)

i'm soooo glad that you liked it...i had been so nervous about getting the characters right, and it's a relief to know that you think i did a decent job of it.

thanks for commenting :)

kitnkabootle June 22 2009, 07:40:27 UTC

I love that you can pin a character down and force it to expel words of your own creation - yet they are entirely in character. I like how you gave Sister A her usual attitude, the boldness we saw in the movie exuded from the character as soon as she entered the room with Sister J's tray.

This is a delicious fic and a small glimpse at these two wonderful characters. :)

ubiquitousmixie June 24 2009, 06:56:31 UTC

thank you so much :) i'm really glad that you liked it. i was trying to capture sister aloysius as having that harshness about her, while at the same time obviously having a sort of a soft side where sister james is concerned. i really like that about her character in the movie - she's so complex and makes for a really dynamic character to watch.

thank you for commenting...it always means so much!